#5 Arhi FF : Limerence [ Completed ]

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BroknAngel

@BroknAngel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Aww...emotional update. Maya left arnav n ajay to with her love life. Was she happy was she able to move forward with guilty of living a child n ajay whom loved her unconditionally. Looking forward fr d next part

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Humayra

@Humayra

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Congrats on the new thread.

Nice update.

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Somehow I don't like what Maya did she could have tried some other way...

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pariarshi

@pariarshi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Congrats on new thread

A beautifully written update,loved all parts of this update teasing,romance and at last the emotional mom and son conversation loved it.It was really like a rollercoaster did feel so emotions in one update,wonderfully u have pen down the emotions

Will surely miss this story... I don't want it to end but what to do all good things do come to an end

Thanks for pm

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

I wanted to read more

I feel Maya was selfish

Jus for herself she broke these 2

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

that was a very nice update..the way you portray the various dimensions in every relationship is simply brilliant and comes across as realistic... Khushi and Payal relationship is brilliantly written..they are like long lost sisters...sisters they never had they have found in each other...next talking about Arnav and Khushi, in dono ke kehne...they take my breath away every time I read about them...slowly in their relationship even the passion is seeping in...first love and now the passion in their relationship is awesomely portrayed and I love it...hmmm..Arnav's confrontation with his mother was long pending and I believe what Maya did was and is wrong on so many levels..may be in the future Arnav and his mother can be cordial but they can never have the son-mother bond, that is what I feel...good update...please do continue soon...waiting for the next update eagerly...

Edited by MysticRiver - 9 years ago