#5 Arhi FF : Limerence [ Completed ]

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Apeter

@Apeter

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Congrats for the new thread... The update was amazing ... Feel really bad for Arnav ...

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Megha

@arshilicious.M

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#42

first of ol...a happy makar sankrati..happy pongal and congrats for ur 5th thread!🤗 though i m sad that this would be the last thread!

the start of the update is awesome with payal and khushi's interaction...the little play the sisters or almost sisters-in-law played was just very cute!...but yeah...u cant act around the person who has taught u acting...toh khushi should be careful the next tym she acts!😆

the arshi tym was just very dreamy and hawt...if the girls in this forum have boyfrends/fiances/husbands ...then these guys should be very careful..coz their girls would ask for a steamy make-out like arshi...and they would curse u to write such awesome scenes...which i dont want!😛
but yeah..the way u r writing such steamy things...pls give a steamy SG too!😳

khushi's thoughts about garima-arnav relationship was just so awesome...but i dont think in real life a mother-in-law nd son-in-law relationship be on such strong base!😲 but yeah the ring thought is something i loved...the way u presented it as khushi's thoughts were superb!👏

reading maya's life..i really felt that it was not really her fault..any girl would have done..what she had done..if not then the family would have turned very bad!😒 the way khushi tried to be arnav's support was heart-touching *teary eyes*...the way manorama reasoned with arnav was also ryt at its place...it was no one's fault...everythng went wrong due to wrong situation!😭 hope arnav's turmoil would be understood by maya..and both the mother-son duo get together in talking terms atleast if not a caring-sharing relation like garima-arnav share!😊

well...khushi was ryt about dealing with the last baggage of past..so that they can start their ly with a gud note!⭐️...hope khushi too shares a superb bond with her mother-in-law and prove that not all the MIL and DIL relations take tym to form a strong bond!😃

well hope that manohar and khushi relation also takes its steady n strong stepswith nk-lav finding their better halves in each other!😉

ohk so i m eagerly and curiously waiting for ur next update...so
update soon..update more..stay healthy and take care!👍🏼

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Filmyshilmy

@dennisdmenace

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Emotional upheaval in Arnav's life.

Thanks for the pm.

Happy Makar Sankranti.

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ZAIDI

@Miss.Zaidi

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#44

I m liking this sadh girl , mintu :D ... such a sweet note :D

I plan to unres till sunday pakkk

I m unressing ..

So shyam was not behind the photo fiasco ..

Arnav explained everything to garima quite well .. i like this sweet bond of garima nd arnav ..

And i absolutely love this about your stories that arhi stand together in hard times .. they are always together to face the hurdles :D <3 ..

Now its arhi s rabba vey time ⭐️

Manorma is a lovely woman .. truly ...

I loved how she talked to khushi ... arnav has got a lovely family ...

Oh mints i nk is the best friend khushi could ever have... poor guy ... <3 ..

Lol ..payal the hitler 😆 .. she is sweet n smart ..

A very interesting character indeed :P ...

Neena got a good reply from our heroine .. haha that was brilliant .. well done khushi 😃

Shyam s chapter is over finally ... :D .. good bye bitwa ...

Oh i hate khushi s father .. n sheetal ... no words...

Arshi ...<3 ... i love them together ...

Arnav is head over heels in love with her .. :P..

Now what...arnav smata ji herewa 😲..

Her side of story was touchwood ... uff .. but she could have convinced ajay and left him taking him in confidence..maybe he would hv let her go ..considering that hewas very understanding n caring ... but what she did waswrong at every level ...atleast for me .. she betrayed a very loving husband and her little son just like that ... she could have managed things in a better way ... but its not entirely her fault ..

Khair chodo ..

I feel bad for arnav nd his dad specially ...

Now what ... what is arnav going to decide ... has he forgiven his mother ? .. why did he call her "maa" ... waiting for the next update ..

Edited by Miss.Zaidi - 9 years ago

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pinkly

@pinkly

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Mints, firstly, a very happy Sankranti to you too.

Secondly, there is no place for disappointment here. I feel it is an honor to read the beautiful stories you write. You take out time to write out of your busy schedule, and I thank you for that.

Thirdly, coming to the story, I liked the interaction between Khushi and Payal as well as Khushi and manorama and even Maya.

Garima was very sweet :-), she was worried about the ring.

I liked the way you have written about maya, why she left arnav with his dad. I hope she is happy in her life after doing all that. Waiting to hear from arnav...

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yeshyeshna

@yeshyeshna

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

awesome part

arnav-khushi are so much in love😃

wonder what decision will arnav take now?

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#47

that was another emotional update...but like Kushi said they all need thier closured and Arnav needs on with his mother as well...

I am not sure i can forgive Maya whatever her reasons for seeking love are ...i doubt if she really did try...and if not she should have just got out when she could instead of involving an innocent child ...but then again its life and all have thier reasons for doing what they do..i wonder what Arnav has to say...