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l.o.v.e.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Oh so arnav know her...interesting...nice update...Continue soon...waiting for the next one...

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pia-loves-sarun

@pia-loves-sarun

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Read this in one go..

Amazing start diii

CNT wait to read more :) :)

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

I'm loving this Arhi twist on Cinderella. I'm glad that Payal is not an evil stepsister and that Akash is coming to see her, not Arnav. Poor Khushi- her stepmother has a grudge for some unknown reason, but at least she has Payal. I wonder how Khushi and Arnav knew each other. Is the woman Arnav is referring to her stepmom?

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Interesting update Lavanya, Very well written.

Evil step mother. Should we really call such evil women a mother irrespective of whether they are real or step.

Atleast Payal seems to be a sensible human being.

So Khushi's father and the Raizadas were friends once.

Waiting to see how this story goes forward.

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Alone111

@Alone111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Wow so arnav does knw her.. Hhmm intrstng chappy...
Loved d updt...

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sweet-fairy

@sweet-fairy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

interesting update

Arnav n khushi know each other

continue soon

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ranogill

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

so they know each other..interesting

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Arnav and Khushi new each other in the past.. interesting..

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outland_123

@outland_123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Loved ur writing 😃. Loved the little 'Cinderella' touch.

So...Arnav knew Khushi before. That means Khushi also knew Arnav. When Khushi was thinking abt her father and him. Him was Arnav i guess. And Khushi kept going Shishmahal bcoz of Arnav may be. May b she was wishing him to come back some day.

Anyways...will wait for the next. 😊