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Posted: 9 years ago
Another fab update!
With more developments in the story, more questions have developed in my tiny brain. So, what was that thing Khushi accidently dropped in the garden and our Prince Raizada found it?
I am guessing, it has to be a payal since you like incroporating elements from the show into your stories ( and I just love that).
Now, I wonder if this mother of Payal's has two horns on her head or one? Because she is pure EVIL!
Payal is sweet. Akash seems sweet too.
And hold on!
Arnav and Khushi share some history?
Were they childhood friends? I am guessing they were but then the devil meddled in the affairs. I wonder how and why. And the only way of knowing for us is for you to update. Getting my point? See, what I am trying to say? Yep, you do. Update SOON... ;
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is sooo amazing
Can't wait for this story to unfold
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome part.
arnav and khushi kniws each other and khushi was sad as she lost contact with him and lost her parents too.
arnav hate khushi step mom that great and awesome . as she is so cruel towards her.
so it gonna be arshi meet after a long tym and faceoff gonna be so wonderfull.
waitung eagerly for next update.
continue sooonnn plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cruel stepmoms grrr! I amused at Garima's audacity actually! She n her daughter came living in Khushi's home one fine day picked up by her father out of no where n instead of being humbly grateful , look at her hhmmmphhff! From where I can see , it seems like pure jealousy n all materiality for Garima!

My heart twisted at how Khushi's been treated at her own home :( Along with that the seperation of Arnav n Khushi during their childhood.. :( :(

The last whisper of Arnav rendered me helpless!! Aur nai hota writer ho.. Pls Arnav Khushi ko milaa deejiye next chapter na...

The premise of the story , I felt like the cinderalla one. Ofcourse the step sis Payal is a sweetheart here.. :)
Posted: 9 years ago
So Arnav is already at daggers drawn with the wicked stepmother? Can't wait for the sparks to fly. That allusion to their past connection sounds intriguing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey,
I am a new reader read both chapters together
Nice story loved it
Update soon
Please PM me ur updates
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter...
Cinderella and the Prince charming...hmmm...still curious is it her payal or some sort of jewelry which Arnav found out.
Evil step mother...but she has a sweet sister Payal jiji. Atleast Payal is there to take care of her little sister and helping her. Khushi is cute.
Hmmm...Arnav recognized Khushi and they are childhood friends.
Thank god it is Akash who is coming to see her not Arnav.
Continue soon dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arey Lavanya bitiya, update kaahe naahi karat ho??
Update soonwa!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww..
The evergreen fairytale of Cinderella 😛

Khushi,her cruel step-mother sans 3 weird step-sisters..

Payal is her sweet,caring elder sis😊
Moreover,she's not interested in Khushi's Prince Charming..
as she's already interested in Aakash..

Khushi has some childhood connection with Arnav..
He has to be HIM 😃

Arnav is already intrigued by the mysterious girl..

n now,he has recognized as Khushi...

though he doesn't know yet that he has spotted her only in the garden..

i JUST LOVED ch 1 n 2..
Accept my buddy request n continue soon !!!!

@ Saiyu..
thanx for the recommendation..

oye..
I remembered .. u r Saiyu n Zehra's ladli La 😛
We've talked earlier through pms ..
n then u told me thzt u've quitted writing..
Welcome back !!! 🤗
Edited by pakpearl - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Please update the next part soon

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