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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

awesome OS

loved the bond between the sisters

n how protective Payal was of khushi from start

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Awesome OS

Indeed beautiful

Thanks for pm

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scrapbooker

@scrapbooker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

For such a small tale, S... you delivered quite a punch... Lucky is the sister for whom you wrote this...

The beauty of a sister's love... The depth you gave to an otherwise mostly colorless Payal... The strength you gave to an otherwise singularly one-sided relationship and the skill with which you tied your story to the original plot... FANTASTIC.

The story was over in a blink, it seemed, but the image my brain has captured... I will savor for a long, long time.

Thank you for inviting me to read this. Loved it!

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Linsie

@Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Beautiful OS...
thanks for the pm...

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#45

sisters bond are really special.. And the relation between Khushi and payal was really like a soul and two bodies.

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Titaliya1234

@Titaliya1234

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Happy bday anu!
Such a heartwarming and touching tale of two sisters! I loved the way you spun this story keeping up with the original track! The bond they share is so pure! Continue soon!

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Alicia2012

@Alicia2012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Wow great short story

I like your story so much about the sisters

Thanks for the pm. Happy birthday to you

Happy holidays to you and your family and friends and new year

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Richelle

@Richelle

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Beautiful story of sisters bonding dat goes way deep!!
Hapi Hapi B'day Anu!! May God Bless u today n alwayz!!

Edited by Richelle - 9 years ago

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sk2405

@sk2405

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

There is something really special in the bonding that 2 sisters share, isn't it? Something lovely, cute and extremely close. Something you would never find between 2 brothers. It's the same with our lovely Gupta sisters, except that the CVs did not use it to their advantage in the show. Anyway, I am glad you explored their deep bond and affection.

Beautifully written!

Many happy returns of the day to the birthday girl!! 😊

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Very beautiful.

Loved to read payal's feelings for khushi.

In ipk we always saw khushi's unconditional love for her jiji, but payal's love was not shown properly after her marriage. Thanks for depicting it in your os.