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sudhareddy

@sudhareddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#61

very beautiful and sweet OS Sadh ❤️ 👏

Loved to read in Payal POV😃

Belated birthday wishes Anu🥳

Hope you had a great day😃

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VioletFlower

@VioletFlower

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Sadh ... This OS is awesome !!! 🤗🤗

Loved it so so so much !! ❤️❤️

A young Payal eager to see her little baby sister was so cute and ... especially the way she 'kissed' her sister and was afraid if she hurt the little one... Adorable !! ❤️❤️

Payal was always protective elder sis and the most perceptive person regarding Khushi's emotions... A mind-reader of sorts... 😉 When Khushi is in her trauma and has shut everyone out... Payal knows the way into her little sis' mind to relieve her of her worries and make her smile. 😊

And another I really liked was that Payal did notice the sparks between Arnav and Khushi... It was natural for an elder sister who could read her sister like an open book to notice the changes in her... But it is a point somewhat ignored in the show... I'm happy you wrote it in your story. 😊 👍🏼

I want some more !! 😛 😉 (I don't mind about your note ... you see. I will try anyway. 😛 ). It doesn't have to be an full-length SS... but atleast one or two more parts pleeease. After the sudden contract marriage of Arnav and Khushi, I've always wondered how Payal didn't see through the facade of Khushi's marital life and never tried to understand the reason behind the sudden runaway marriage, when she knew all of Khushi's dreams of huge wedding. 🤔

Anyway... what you have written is damn superb !!! Luv ya !! 🤗🤗

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Beautiful.. in the show Payal and Khushi bonding was very beautiful but it ended after their marriage.. You stopped at the right time...

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#64

That was a very emotional and touching story beautifully penned down...loved it...

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: Sadh123
A/N:

Thanks for loving this story so much and showering so much love on this rare story. I wrote this one mainly to depict the forgotten bond between Payal and Khushi, which had lost its impact after her marriage. And the second reason, it was for my dear Anu di... So, I have no plans of writing a part two or a sequel for this... As of now, this will remain as an One Shot. If anyone felt this to be incomplete, I am sorry. I ended this right before her marriage because Payal from the show lost her luster too then. But I am glad you all liked it so much that you wanted a sequel.

Thank you... And to read more of my works, visit
Daydream Diaries

Sadhu my bachchi,

I am incredibly delighted with the rousing reception this story has received. In some odd and indirect way, I like to think I inspired you to write it, so basking in reflected glory! The egoistic human mind, haha! Thank you again for what was a memorable birthday indeed...to you for writing it and for all the forumwaasis for appreciating it as much as they have done! God bless! 😛

Hugs! ❤️

Anu Di

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Bhuvana

@NASAKE

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Hi sadha, my sweet tangi, very very beautiful os dear... An elder little sister (payal), wanted a baby sister n also named d smaller one as happiness of life (khushi). An innocent elder sister wanted her baby sister to b always happy... Wow... How taughtful. N not just she named her khushi but also kept her baby sister r tried to keep her happy.. Sisters bonding is mesmerizing, n beautiful. A selfless sisters.

Sadha thx for pm dear,.. Really very heart touching n took me to d beautiful memories of me n my own sister. Trust me when my sis got married I used to cry @ night for whole month coz I have to practice sleeping all alone in our room... But my sister was a darling, she used to call me thrice a day so that I don't feel alone all of a sudden after her marriage.

Love u my tangi.😛😛