ArHi OS : Sisters' Tale || A/N Page 10

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Posted: 9 years ago

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edited my comment on page 3 :)

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asrcraze

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Posted: 9 years ago

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There is a bond that only sisters share and in our show Payal and Khushi had a beautiful bond which unfortunately the makers did not think as much of as we did... Though Payal did not talk much when it came to her sister, she did stand up always...once after the guest house scene when she lashed out at ASR and then during Shyam's fiasco! She was there for her always...

This is one of those rare pieces of work that views things from Payal's POV and reading it was a nice experience :)

Very belated happy birthday to the birthday girl :-)

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Sarita

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Really enjoyed reading something from Payal's perspective.

In the initial episodes, I loved the bond between Khushi and Payal's characters... so strong and loving, but somewhere in all the other sub plots, the essence of it got lost!

But here, the essence was thoroughly there :)

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afsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Nice OS

Ull be writing 2nd part right

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hiya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

awesome os...
thnks 4 d pm...

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chinnulu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Wonderful OS

Loved Payal's POV

Thanks for the PM

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Rashi Bhargava

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Beautiful os
Really flawlessly written

Belated hppy b'day dear

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BroknAngel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

It was awesome yaar.. wil u continue it pls..

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Jini Tracy ;)

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hey sadh..its gud that u r fyn...

i loved this os as it is about the two sisters...

i can very well relate this to mine as i hav got a small baby sister at home who is just 2 months old :D

being a elder sister needs so much patience and maturity..right?

and this should not be a ArHi os, it should be KushAl os...just kidding

woah u r back... and r u out of ur writers block?? 🤣 (u remember that ryt?)

shower us with a lot more os:)

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kowshira9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Nice one,is this going tobe a rwo shot ?

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