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anera

@anera

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Was not khushi a newbie and she was accepted in movies by marrying shyam

So Now that she have known that shyam is narcissest she chose For arnav

And what if later arnav fall For Someone Els then khushi Will chosesomeone else to promote her movies

She. Could just have divorced shyam

I dont feel right by this story

This story doesnt have any consciousness

How ever to read it just happening on 2D is ok

However in this story shyam was not a bad person he had a problem and needed help from pyscologist

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#72

This story reminds me of the movie Abhimaan.

Husband can never digest the fact that his wife is more successful than him, atleast it is true quite commonly. Very rarely do we find such men who pride at their wife's success.

Shyam belongs to the category of those common men and surely not to the latter one.

You know Chaitali, even during the days of L3, I was the one who used to bug you with so many questions. Today too, I still have so many questions about this story. I wish that you had made this as a SS instead of an OS.

I know that your style of writing is different, you mostly give the essential part out leaving the rest to the imagination of the readers but still somewhere I am totally not convinced with you this time. I wish you had given us a little more into Khushi's background or how Arnav and Khushi fell for each other and what has made Shyam what he is today???

Nevertheless, this was a quite a nice story with some hard hitting facts and truths.

Ultimately a nice message that a woman is not just a doormat to a man's ego, she is equal to him in every aspects including choosing the right life partner.

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: TwilightStar_JP
Mind blowingly awesome!! Like damn it was just too good! Loved it till 'the end'
Beautifully penned down!

Still reeling in the effects!

Cheers

Really hilarious ending. Finally Shyam is taught a good lesson.

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Mints23

@mints23

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

That was a fab update Chaitu. The nuances of life behind the big scree beautifully portrayed. Although it is much more gruesome and tainted in real. Loved how in flashbacks you have shown the changing dynamics of Khushi's relationship with both the men. Shyam's ego and competitiveness with Arnav, can only mean his downfall. He unfortunately does not even pretend to like Arnav, like most our celebs do. I am glad here that Arnav actually fell for Khushi... because in asli duniya... there are lots of men out there to take advantage... especially in the film line. Its sad but very true. The Page3 only talks about what people want to hear... gossip sells... no one wants to know the real story... because for that, you have the main supplement of the newspaper! And even though I would have loved to read more of this tale in detail... I loved how you have brought out this topic in mere two updates. Hats off girl... and do keep writing... because we are always waiting! 😆

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anera

@anera

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: canapoem
This story reminds me of the movie Abhimaan.
Husband can never digest the fact that his wife is more successful than him, atleast it is true quite commonly. Very rarely do we find such men who pride at their wife's success.

Shyam belongs to the category of those common men and surely not to the latter one.

You know Chaitali, even during the days of L3, I was the one who used to bug you with so many questions. Today too, I still have so many questions about this story. I wish that you had made this as a SS instead of an OS.

I know that your style of writing is different, you mostly give the essential part out leaving the rest to the imagination of the readers but still somewhere I am totally not convinced with you this time. I wish you had given us a little more into Khushi's background or how Arnav and Khushi fell for each other and what has made Shyam what he is today???

Nevertheless, this was a quite a nice story with some hard hitting facts and truths.

Ultimately a nice message that a woman is not just a doormat to a man's ego, she is equal to him in every aspects including choosing the right life partner.

Hey canapoem

Nice comment

I know that their are very few men whom would be happy For their wife's success

And i also know that shyam belong to men whom think their WiFe 's are door mat

And he never Seems to see khushi more then arnav

He always saw that arnav is the only one whom he have to conquer

Khushi just is Notting For shyam

But is that how women should show that she is more then doormat by running away with other man?

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Wonderful update
Loved it
Well written
Superb ending
Thanks for the mail

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Excellent TS chaitu
Fantastic dear
Loved it
Welcome back
Pls write more - we miss ur writings

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Hai Chaitu,?i loved your way of penning the story, so different yet captivating. Loved the style of ending the story with an Article. It does makes one think the reasons behind the decisions Bollywood actors take, they are the ones judged often , yet they face so much .