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Posted: 10 years ago
#51
ahaan...
such an interesting start...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Yay, you're back Chaitali and right back in the saddle writing what we love to read. Congratulations on your first job and good luck!!!

Shyam and Khushi a couple ...hmmm. And Shyam being one self-centered b*****d, Khushi trying to get a foot in the door in the field of acting, has outdone herself in her first film itself. Was it circumstances that they ended together? There sure seems to be some sort of a twist here.

Lavanya not just a Page 3 reporter but a movie critic as well...Did she get what she was looking for at the venue?

Am glad that Arnav is one sensible actor. Interesting interaction between Khushi and him... But what's with the kiss in front of the shutterbugs. Agreed he doesn't read Page 3 news, but isn't he aware that Khushi's taken.

Overall...it's interesting...will wait to see how you turn things around..

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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Their is a problem with ur text showing Like this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
My darling!!!🤗

You know, I caught this OS suddenly in the forum while surfing and...gosh, it was exhilarating.

The background of fame through acting was refreshing, indeed!😉

you have to end it up with Arshi.😃

Writing was,as usual, fantastic and it is just a cakewalk for you...I am proud of you.🤗

You came with a bang. Ka-boom!!!

Oye,tu jaldi se next part update kar warna teko pareshan kardungi main.🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Hey! What a pleasant surprise! 😃
You are back...and with a bang!
Welcome back!

And what an amazing piece you have put up here! You are an awesome writer!
I am sure, nobody would have guessed the guy in the first part to be Shyam...
and Arnav? He is still a mystery to all of us...hope there are some interesting surprises stored in for us...I guess something happened between Arnav and Khushi, while they were shooting for the film? Or they have some past?
I am too eager to know... can't wait to read its second part!







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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Khushi Shyam couple NO!!
Waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Nice os
Shyam is insecure and want to be winner
He only think that arnav is going to win and is doing everything to do better then arnav
Shyam doesnt think that khushi can win
And i think iTS khushi whom need more confidenc from shyam then otherway
And when khushi is going to win is shyam going For divorce
Why is lavarnya taking that kind of photos and is she working with arnav

Are lav and arnav working together to break khushis marriage

Nice os
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
Great to have you back...and what a come back...absolutely riveting!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
Awesome OS...can't wait for next part...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Nice part
Waiting to read more
Shayam is self obsessed😆😆

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