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Awesome.. look on shyam's face was more interesting than the trophies she won.. loved this line.. simply superb story..

Originally posted by: anera

Hey canapoem

Nice comment

I know that their are very few men whom would be happy For their wife's success

And i also know that shyam belong to men whom think their WiFe 's are door mat

And he never Seems to see khushi more then arnav

He always saw that arnav is the only one whom he have to conquer

Khushi just is Notting For shyam

But is that how women should show that she is more then doormat by running away with other man?

That was a nice shot... A story with a difference... With a pinch of reality...

This was such a nice OS with full masala and underlying emotions. I loved it but I want more. I want to know more about the heart breaker-philanderer couple's two years which were missing in the report. 😉 I want to know how they stuck together for this long, I mean what made Khushi change her mind. 😳 You shared some and hid some aspects in a true bollywood industry style. 😆
Shyam was quite a self-obsessed man here with having time only to talk about Arnav. How can a man be so self absorbed that he doesn't understand his attitude is hurting his partner?
But good for Khushi and Arnav. I want to know how the skirt chaser became truthful to one skirt?😉😆

So glad to have you back on the writing table, Chaitu.

Beautiful story! Thanks for the pm.

wowww...

wow this was fantastic piece Chaitalee... was what a come back... i was so excited when i saw u posted something new 😃

Enjoyed every bit of this. Would have loved to see this into a SS!

Chaituuu🤗

As promised, I came with my bag of blabbers. Since this is your story, I have full freedom to utter any non-sense.😆

And, I would love to be a critic...😛

The plot...ahh well, you have written it in such a way that it looks like you have researched a lot.
The limelight, greed for fame, true motives of people and the double-standards were well depicted.

My fav character was Khushi, hands down. You have penned her really really well. She is your hot bread in this story and she is the metaphor for all celebrities and a synecdoche for your themes.

Shyam, err. Irritating. Yes, he is. But, yea, it had to be done. Arnav was good too. Ever-supporting.

Writing style, kuchh bolna hai? No doubt it is simply awesome.

All in all, it was extremely exciting to read this and was gripping.

Kuchh aur likhegi toh batana🤗