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ps welcome back, hope ur staying 😳

You have fit all the IPK main characters so well.. and Shyam being Khushi's husband is a nice twist. Waiting to know what transpired in the next months. And why did Khushi marry so early ?

This was totally you. Twists & turns & then, more twists. When the OS started, I thought the two people were Arnav & Khushi. And, when you didn't mention the names right away, I remembered that it is your writing, & it would never be quite so straightforward. And, ta-da. It turned out to be Shyam-Khushi. I like the way the tempo built. And, at the end of part one, I realised that we know some things about Shyam, quite a bit about Khushi but next to nothing about Arnav. Deliberately done? Knowing you, most probably. And, I LOVED the setting, in the movie industry. I understand the constraints that is brought on by a busy AD, but when I saw "to be continued" at the end of part one, I frankly, for one long moment hoped that it is a new SS. But oh well, it is a two part OS. No issues. Something is better than nothing. Welcome back, Chaitalee. So glad to see you writing here, again. I am looking forward to the second part.

Very interesting, and you kept me guessing about the equation between Arnav and Khushi... while shes married to Shyam... you gave nothing about Arnav.

Waiting for the next one.

Welcome back! And I read life has been interesting and congratulations on the switch from student to corporate! :) :)

And now coming to this, do I need to tell it again? It's lovely as usual! You rock man! Wonderfully penned down.. And trust me I read it twice to confirm Shyam was actually her husband! That felt so I don't know unacceptable :P

And the last part I'm like shit I need more details! I get the professional rivalry but the photo scene! I'm lost there!

Let's see where this is going to take us to!

Cheers