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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Loved it..good to see u back

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

resing is funn!

sorry main thodaa late ho gyi but honestly mene ye teen chaar baar pada hai just to get each and everything clear.😛

so. shyam humesha slimeball hi rahega na FFs mein?? poor boy. i feel for him.

coming to story. there was everything which i wanted to read. ArHi. love. reality. nothing more nothing less.

life is not black or white as we see it, it got shades of gray. people are not perfect or tyag ki murat. people are like shyam who see Arnav as a competition a threat. people are like Arnav who lives their lives as they wish deeply hoping that somewhere in the middle they will get their stability, their khushi😊. people took hasty decisions like khushi, thinking about happy endings and prince charming but then realizing thier mistakes soon!

i want to quote a friend here. Recently she said something to me which i think goes well with this.well, i think. " wherever fame,money and power is involved, doesnt matter its entertainment,politics, sports or corporate world,doesnt matter what age or country it is, THE PEOPLE STINK! (credit: a friend who you know😉)

i really loved the way Arnav and khushi tackled shayam. he really needs that reality check. and admist helping each other they find their solace. the love which was missing. khushi got that prince charming and arnav too got that stability.now he will love only ONE woman😆

aksash and lavanya's characters were also well written.

tu acha likhti hai yaar bolne ki zaroorat hai?? chal abb likh de ek intense romance fiction😳

Edited by BlackHole - 10 years ago

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@.LadyHitler.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Intriguing, that's what i can say about this!
Though its a TS and you've already updated one part, there's mystery about the characters and their relationships!
Beautifully written!

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loves_aishu

@loves_aishu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Wow you are back!!!!!

And what a comeback,

just an amazing start!!!

Great work!!!!!

Detailed cmments later one!!!

Just here to tell how much am happy to see you back!!!!

😊

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Jyothi Rockzy

@jyothirockz

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Loved it.. It was a wonderful beging..

So. does Arnav not know of Khushi's marriage to Shyam ?

Why is Khushi still Khushi Gupta and not a Jha ?

Is it on Shyam's wish or hers ?

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Bhool gayi.

@Sanaya.Barun

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Now this is the kind of thing i was roaming around on IF since days to read!

There's not much good stuff left here! I'm so glad i found this :D

This is SO interesting. A fresh concept. Cant wait for more!

PS- loved the way you wrote it!

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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

nice to read your writing dear :)

as always flawless..:)

waiting to read the next part

welcome back😊

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Few days back I was wondering where is Chaitu...so glad to see you back on forum.. Welcome back

Good to know you are in corporate world now...congratulations..

What a superb start...already waiting for next update :)

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Lovely to see you back, girl. What an incredible story this time around. Why just one part, I think you could easily spin this one into a great short story. It has all the makings of a classic pot boiler. And there is so much drama possible...of course there is when you put Arnav, Khushi and Shyam in the mix. Waiting to see 'Raizada run away with what is his' this time around...i.e. Khushi!

Best,

Edited by Anu567 - 10 years ago