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Arunima

@barsha_dash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#721

I will come back to this note tomorrow morning after I clear my mind! Hmph!
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My mind is clear and I support whatever you decide 😃😉 (You know why. 😆)

Edited by barsha_dash - 9 years ago

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Anu567

@Anu567

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#722

Cheeni,

You have to do what you have to as a writer...go with your plan...though I think it would be a loss to all those who want to read it later on or re-read at leisure...and it is an important issue. I would say simply ignore those who feel they are uninspired by this beautiful storyline on such a relevant social issue. Good luck!

Best,

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@Deluna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#723

what the...

I don't know why people don't like it. But trust me, I would love to read it again and again.

ps: I will save the story in my pc if you really decide to take it down. :p

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@mu12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#724

i love to re read good stories , memories come in that category . but i can understand u. its u r baby, so u know what is better for it 😊

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Nidhi Nevatia

@NidhiNev

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Posted: 9 years ago

#725

So I guess.. Something's of the past do effect the future... Soft at heart, a tough nut exterior. Here, 'Alzheimer' was the key word which made Khushi go a bit soft. Anjali suffering from Alzheimer' Khushi's mom too had Alzheimers and had died.

Sometimes I feel Akaash cares for Khushi, else he wouldn't have remembered and recommended Khushi's name to take care of Anjali. Not only did he know she would be wonderful, but also that Khushi would have a job. The whole thing might teach Khushi how to handle finance but get her life sorted too.

I dunno... I might be reading too much into Akaash's job offer to Khushi. I could be completely wrong too ! But I wish Khushi's life gets back on track.

So, what's Arnav's story and the girl whom he was hopelessly in Love with. The girl whom he remembered on flight was it Khushi by any chance, because I think flashbacks are about to come up.

In the beginning of the update Anjali went to the publisher in her car and came out and took the sub-way ... I read that twice !!! My expression, what's wrong she came in her car which is parked right there and she walks off towards the subway, forgetting about her car !? Well the answer I got immediately though.

Waiting for Arnav and Khushi introduction / meeting. Also Anjali and Khushi's.

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Mrieshka

@Mrieshka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#726

No, Please do not remove it because of some people. Its beautiful. thanks

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#727

please do not remove it ...i know its not every one's cup of tea..but life is not a fairytale every time ...some time we want to read about realties of life ...

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#728

cheeni..

I would just like to say that, do whatever you would want to.. I understand that when something is really close to your heart compared to the other things, you are bound to be more protective over it, same goes with the stories also, when something is special, its special..

Though I love re-reading stories and memories it a lovely one which I would love to read after wards also but still its upto you to decide for final decision..

May be you can make a private blog or something for it, just a suggestion..