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cheesemad

@cheesemad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: canapoem

Cheeni, finally read the update. It was very good Cheeni, no doubt about it.

Payal's insecurities about Akash and their relationship was totally understandable. Her questioning Akash's actions and reactions, totally necessary.

Now I want to know why did Akash not turn back and look at his ailing mother or his struggling little sister. I am sure he is guilty about it. Is this the guilt which led him to drug addiction?

I hope he gives some honest answers to Payal's questions. And want to know more about their father too.

Happy to see the blossoming camaraderie between Arnav and Khushi. Arnav probably still thinks that Anjali needs Khushi but waiting for him to realise that he would need Khushi more and days pass by.

However tough Khushi tries to project herself from outside, she is as soft as a butter in the inside. Every update my heart goes out to her more and more.

PS: Regarding your note, Cheenu, it is your story dear, you can do as you wish. But one thing I will agree with you, it is a special story and I am glad that you are writing it.

Kavi Di 🤗

First of all lovely picture, so true. Remember I told you about the book, Still Alice? I read it finally and yes, i cried. Though Memories has Alzheimer's in it but I do not think I can ever be able to bring that feel to this story. But I recommend, please read it whenever you get time 😳

You are one of those readers, who just grab the hint and predict exactly what is going to happen 😆 Next chapter is for you 😉 As I have mentioned before this is a character driven story, as we are moving from one chapter to the other, story is more or less the same but there is subtle change in every character. A

kash will say anything or not, I won't tell you that but I will tell you one thing, next chapter are crucial for Akash, and Arnav will play and important role in all this. Khushi has done enough, its time for our ASR to shine 😆 Drug addiction started as he entered the college, definitely related to his mother 😉

Thanks for understanding Di, you are an indispensable part of Memories! Thank you!

Edited by cheesemad - 9 years ago

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Zuriah

@Zuriah

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#742

Cheeni...that was really sweet of u to respond n take things in a positive way..

I dont know what difficulties several readers have for understanding this amazing concept...if anyone has doubt I guess u can re read it for better understanding or clear their confusion by posting comments. ..

Happy that u considered us a part of family..really touched my heart🤗

No matter who likes it or not..who loves it or not...u know what u r doing n u surely doo feel contended with ur story so just keep writing...

I m already too much engrossed with this story...soo much that I feel thatthese things are happening with some one in my neighbour. ..

Just update soon..waiting to read penny of ur thoughts😊

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-Roshini-

@-Roshini-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#743

I have no problem with ur decision
1 month is more than enough for me to re read it :)
Good luck

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Jini Tracy ;)

@-cadbury-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#744

Pls dont do that cheeni...its an interesting story with really a good plot...

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: srain10
Fabulous update...
I think there is more to akash's story why he left behind his mother and sister to be with his father... flashback shows both akash and khushi were very close and shared great bonding or he is just mean and selfish...
Payal should talk to akash about her insecurities though they both are in love but payal's insecurities and fear are good for their relationship future...
Khushi with her experience was able to calm down anjali and she will help a support to arnav inthis distress...
I'm desperately waiting for arnav-tara story...
Loved anjali playing Cupid and only thinking about ger brother's happiness...
PS:i love memories this is one of my favourite stories in the forum...will love to reread it again...but if you want to remove it's your call after it's your baby...when i read it's about Alzheimer's i thought it will be like Nicolas Spark's Note Book but it's totally different...

hey!

coming two chapters are important for us, for me as a writer, for you as a reader. The bookstore Memory was meant suggest that they are pretty close to each other 😃 And it worked, I am so glad 😊

About Tara and Arnav, I have not yet sorted out how am I going to reveal it to you guys. But as soon as Tara's issue make an entry, it will mean that we are nearing to the end. I hope I sort it out pretty soon.

Coming to The Notebook, this might shock you that I have not read the book, neither do I have seen he movie. Why? Because I never knew it had Alzheimer's element to it. I will read it now, next trip tp book store, I will get a copy of notebook. Thank you so much for letting me know.

Can I know your name? 😳

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Fe-en-Dios

@Fe-en-Dios

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: cheesemad

Akash will very soon. But because he hasn't taken any step since years, he needs a push and he will get that very soon😉

Yes absolutely, physical strength is different and emotional is different, we are STRONG!😃

Tara will come, not very soon but soon😆

I want Tara back ' cries '

Btw u know me
If u love the story take it down else let it stay

Will get back soon TC
Muah

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Aysha

@ChocolateArshi

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#747

Plzzz don't remove:'(Its a wonderful story,it has an amazing concept<3Keep writing.

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sher_lock

@sher_lock

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#748

well...true everyone has different opinion.
and this is mine.

I love this story. just came across recently. and finished reading it completely. it is very unique and beautiful I would say.

from now on you can count 81 ;) including me as your constant reader.

lots of love. muuuahh

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pooja_sanu

@pooja_sanu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#749

U can't b serious... Anyways its your decision if u want to keep it or remove it...but I must say it's a very much awesome ss...I really do like it a lot😊😊... So no offence to anybody.. I totally love it...😃😃