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Dhruvi Gupta

@Dhrenu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#731

I want to re read it just like i re read your others writeups i dont how many times..?? 😊 but its okk if you want to take it off from IF:) its your baby so it should be purely your decision !! :)

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Nidhi Nevatia

@NidhiNev

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: cheesemad
I have no idea why i did this?! Spamming my own thread I guess :P

I don't think you are spamming, but it was just your habit of commenting on updates which made you do it.

I loved this update...I don't know what to write about Anjali. Best part is that till now she is fine.

Oh ! I loved the Anjali - Khushi bonding, their talking sessions. Which surprised Khushi. Happy Khushi is observing her and not pestering her. Even though Khushi realised that Anjali had forgotten the password of the iPad where the family photo was.

On one hand Khushi observing the endearing sibling bond between Arnav and Anjali and the other Akash and Her's. Feel sorry for Khushi but then the sourness between Akash and her was due to their behaviours.

The phone call...and Arnav noticed Khushi. 😉 😆 Now will start Arnav - Khushi encounters. War prone area.

Anjali is gonna have a tough time keeping the two kids apart from fighting. And what will happen in the days to come.

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Pdrover

@Pdrover

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#733

I love this story and like it too is close to my heart

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samsung04

@samsung04

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#734

First of all IM IN LOVE WITH THS STORY..
As i said everyone has choices.. V cannot force to like our priorities..
Its ur baby n ur decision is upmost..
But on readers part.. I love it n i damn love it..
Waiting for d update

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Sayari

@sayari_sanki99

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#735

Cheeni di, it's completely your choice and decision. Do whatever you want to do. It's your story at the end of the day. I know that readers are also important and involved in the story but I think you should do whatever makes you happy 😊 And I am glad that you are not letting any kind of negativity affect you. It's your story and you should be the only one deciding what to do with it. As a reader, my only expectation from a writer is to finish whatever he started. As long as you complete this journey with us, I am all ok. That's completely my POV 😳 By the way, jo bhi decide karogi bata dena...if you decide to take it down when it's over, tell me so that I can take screenshots or copy-paste it in my computer...in case I want to re-read this brilliant story 😉😆

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canapoem

@canapoem

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#736

Cheeni, finally read the update. It was very good Cheeni, no doubt about it.

Payal's insecurities about Akash and their relationship was totally understandable. Her questioning Akash's actions and reactions, totally necessary.

Now I want to know why did Akash not turn back and look at his ailing mother or his struggling little sister. I am sure he is guilty about it. Is this the guilt which led him to drug addiction?

I hope he gives some honest answers to Payal's questions. And want to know more about their father too.

Happy to see the blossoming camaraderie between Arnav and Khushi. Arnav probably still thinks that Anjali needs Khushi but waiting for him to realise that he would need Khushi more and days pass by.

However tough Khushi tries to project herself from outside, she is as soft as a butter in the inside. Every update my heart goes out to her more and more.

PS: Regarding your note, Cheenu, it is your story dear, you can do as you wish. But one thing I will agree with you, it is a special story and I am glad that you are writing it.

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#737

Fabulous update...

I think there is more to akash's story why he left behind his mother and sister to be with his father... flashback shows both akash and khushi were very close and shared great bonding or he is just mean and selfish...

Payal should talk to akash about her insecurities though they both are in love but payal's insecurities and fear are good for their relationship future...

Khushi with her experience was able to calm down anjali and she will help a support to arnav inthis distress...

I'm desperately waiting for arnav-tara story...

Loved anjali playing Cupid and only thinking about ger brother's happiness...

PS:i love memories this is one of my favourite stories in the forum...will love to reread it again...but if you want to remove it's your call after it's your baby...when i read it's about Alzheimer's i thought it will be like Nicolas Spark's Note Book but it's totally different...

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cheesemad

@cheesemad

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: NidhiNev

I don't think you are spamming, but it was just your habit of commenting on updates which made you do it.

I loved this update...I don't know what to write about Anjali. Best part is that till now she is fine.

Oh ! I loved the Anjali - Khushi bonding, their talking sessions. Which surprised Khushi. Happy Khushi is observing her and not pestering her. Even though Khushi realised that Anjali had forgotten the password of the iPad where the family photo was.

On one hand Khushi observing the endearing sibling bond between Arnav and Anjali and the other Akash and Her's. Feel sorry for Khushi but then the sourness between Akash and her was due to their behaviours.

The phone call...and Arnav noticed Khushi. 😉 😆 Now will start Arnav - Khushi encounters. War prone area.

Anjali is gonna have a tough time keeping the two kids apart from fighting. And what will happen in the days to come.

LOL war prone areas 😆

Yes Khushi is just observing Anjali and taking care of her. She is experienced she knows how could she react, so she is taking it slowly.

I hope you will enjoy next chapters too.

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729619

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#739

Ultimately, it's your decision as to whether you want to keep it on iF or remove it! But it would be nice if you transfer it to a blog or something so that should we want to re-read it, it will still be accessible. You could do it such that whoever wants to re-read has to ask you for the link!

On a side note, i really like the way you write! I don't know about others but i'm a fan of your writing!