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DurgaS

@DurgaS

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

Beautiful Indi. Had seen this earlier in the day, but got diverted by bitiya.

Lovely. Yes, desire there in both pair of eyes, only one's words didn't match the same. Yes, aane do. For now she's his, no one to put a finger on them and lay malicious accusations. He's hers, her Arnavji, no one or nothing to snatch him away from her. They now belong to each other, this bond sealed with a kiss.

Ok, make that three. 😉

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DurgaS

@DurgaS

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: InspiredSoul

Indi,

Aane do ...
These poems, these gems
Just keep bringing 'em!

Aane do ...
The words that capture
The essence of those raptures!

Aane do ...
'Cause we will never tire
Of reading these rhymes!

Aane do ...
The pearls from your mind
And please do accept
The thanks from my heart!

Hey Indi! Love these impromptu poems that you post, because they come straight from that corner of your heart that seems to beat to that rhythm - dhak dhak, dhak dhak! You have such a lovely way of expressing - of putting in words all those breathy emotions ...

And that pic - the colors, the effect, the angles, that pose - classy!
Thank you for this post!

Hugs,
IS

Hello IS,

Have read you a few times on blast and also the during the few visits I made to Reliving. Always loved your pondering thoughts and flow in your writings. The above, so true about Indi's works. Thank you.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

BEAUTIFUL... how these two create poetry, or should i say music... for us, they are the synonym of sur taal & laya... they are magical... amazing Indi Di & IS...

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Indi,

For now I can't take my eyes off of those edits.. stunning .. festive.. reflecting the mood of the wedding days..

will be back..

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: DurgaS
Beautiful Indi. Had seen this earlier in the day, but got diverted by bitiya.

Lovely. Yes, desire there in both pair of eyes, only one's words didn't match the same. Yes, aane do. For now she's his, no one to put a finger on them and lay malicious accusations. He's hers, her Arnavji, no one or nothing to snatch him away from her. They now belong to each other, this bond sealed with a kiss.

Ok, make that three. 😉

ha ha ha, i like, make that three... can i be greedy and say thirty?

hey, thanks for reading. this one was so about needing these guys back.

i can't believe it's all over. there i go being drama queen again.

i like what you say, in pink. no one can create havoc any more... not even society. so yeah, let it come.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
BEAUTIFUL... how these two create poetry, or should i say music... for us, they are the synonym of sur taal & laya... they are magical... amazing Indi Di & IS...

hi nishu_shorna,

thank you. yes, they are poetry to me. and certainly one of them is my muse. some day we must fund research to find out how these two people could do this to all of us, just hold us enthralled. especially a life hardened khadoos type old lady like me. so good to see you. salaam to your books.

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aarwen

@aarwen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

I went crazy trying to log in and comment indi. Stunning edits. The line aane do is actually a copy of dilwale dulhaniya le jayenge. And I am Shahrukh fan too, but ASR's aane do and even kaun rokega mujhe.. how can he be this perfect someone please tell me?

have felt it too the urge to write, edit, do, say, share, express while watching these two.. can't take my eyes off your post. thank you for sharing.

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: indi52

aane do.
come
and see me
adorn my lover
with the rampant
beat in my heart
with the flagrant
gift of desire
with triumphant
exulting love

he had put a ring made of gauze on her finger long ago, and now a ring of gold he'd made her wear. surely, this needed to be sealed with a kiss. he took her to the poolside, that's the rasam, after all.

aane do.
no matter what comes
or goes
or passes by
without even a look at us
i'll be yours
here in this moment still
and always forever

her lips said what if, but, someone may come. her eyes said, won't you... won't you please... kiss me. how could he say no.

aane do.
let it come...
and come what may
i'll be there.

he held her hand and dragged her to the poolside, and today it took them no time to reach the wall where stopped hiding, no need to fight the feelings, no need to draw away. she trembled, he fell in love all over again.

last night watched some ipk and felt like writing a poem. couldn't find any words though. then saw this scene and started editing, before i knew it i was writing... pagal. hope you enjoyed and felt the poetry of these two... no need for words... and yet one must write. sigh. thanks so much for coming here, reading and i hope you are in a sigh state too.

IPK always had two love stories.. one on screen and another of that of ours with them. This moment was one of those that we fell in love with them all over again.

Beautifully captured indi...

loved those top lines.. poignant touching thought .. his heart beat, desire and love being her ornaments...

oh yes how much he loved to see her dhak dhaks..

those edits worked wonders.. that moss green is adding so much charm.. and that duplicate effect too...

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: InspiredSoul

Indi,

Aane do ...

These poems, these gems

Just keep bringing 'em!

Aane do ...

The words that capture

The essence of those raptures!

Aane do ...

'Cause we will never tire

Of reading these rhymes!

Aane do ...

The pearls from your mind

And please do accept

The thanks from my heart!

Hey Indi! Love these impromptu poems that you post, because they come straight from that corner of your heart that seems to beat to that rhythm - dhak dhak, dhak dhak! You have such a lovely way of expressing - of putting in words all those breathy emotions ...

And that pic - the colors, the effect, the angles, that pose - classy!

Thank you for this post!

Hugs,

IS

Miss reading you my friend..

Capturing the rapture .. what a beautiful thought..👏

Yes indi's writings very well do that..

yours too...

btw, have to share, was watching this re run epi yday and that dialogue still rings my ears

"Arnav singh raizada ko dekhne ke liye tax lagtha hai kya"😆

I am sure it was deliberate by the writers..

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stg1

@stg1

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#20

sigh ... ab aur kya bolun? beautiful words indi and ur edits r giving me the same dhak dhaks that this scene always gives me 😳 i always feel the poetry in these two - just a look, a glance, a glare, a pout or a lift of that eyebrow and i find the depth and the love and that breathy, sigh inducing, electrifying emotion and of course i fall again. and really, how does that lower register 'aane do' and a slow kiss on the forehead feel so much more intimate and sexier than the explicit stuff that is the norm? is it the way he looks at her? or the way she looks back at him? dream weavers, both of them, and utterly magical together always

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