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Posted: 10 years ago
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aane do.
come
and see me
adorn my lover
with the rampant
beat in my heart
with the flagrant
gift of desire
with triumphant
exulting love

he had put a ring made of gauze on her finger long ago, and now a ring of gold he'd made her wear. surely, this needed to be sealed with a kiss. he took her to the poolside, that's the rasam, after all.



aane do.
no matter what comes
or goes
or passes by
without even a look at us
i'll be yours
here in this moment still
and always forever

her lips said what if, but, someone may come. her eyes said, won't you... won't you please... kiss me. how could he say no.


aane do.
let it come...
and come what may
i'll be there.

he held her hand and dragged her to the poolside, and today it took them no time to reach the wall where stopped hiding, no need to fight the feelings, no need to draw away. she trembled, he fell in love all over again.






last night watched some ipk and felt like writing a poem. couldn't find any words though. then saw this scene and started editing, before i knew it i was writing... pagal. hope you enjoyed and felt the poetry of these two... no need for words... and yet one must write. sigh. thanks so much for coming here, reading and i hope you are in a sigh state too.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Indi,

Aane do ...
These poems, these gems
Just keep bringing 'em!

Aane do ...
The words that capture
The essence of those raptures!

Aane do ...
'Cause we will never tire
Of reading these rhymes!

Aane do ...
The pearls from your mind
And please do accept
The thanks from my heart!

Hey Indi! Love these impromptu poems that you post, because they come straight from that corner of your heart that seems to beat to that rhythm - dhak dhak, dhak dhak! You have such a lovely way of expressing - of putting in words all those breathy emotions ...

And that pic - the colors, the effect, the angles, that pose - classy!
Thank you for this post!


Hugs,
IS

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: InspiredSoul


Indi,


Aane do ...
These poems, these gems
Just keep bringing 'em!

Aane do ...
The words that capture
The essence of those raptures!

Aane do ...
'Cause we will never tire
Of reading these rhymes!

Aane do ...
The pearls from your mind
And please do accept
The thanks from my heart!

Hey Indi! Love these impromptu poems that you post, because they come straight from that corner of your heart that seems to beat to that rhythm - dhak dhak, dhak dhak! You have such a lovely way of expressing - of putting in words all those breathy emotions ...

And that pic - the colors, the effect, the angles, that pose - classy!
Thank you for this post!


Hugs,
IS



hi is,

thanks so much... you are too kind and i love your aane do-ing he he. so felt like watching and expressing last night... this is on a facebook event, but i thought why not post it here... didn't want to plague the world with pm... glaaad to see you here.

yeah, we will never get over it i think... actually i am not even trying to. teehee.


you like the edits? again, one can do what one pleases with them and it all works.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is my first post that I read to that I started my day 😊 and I must say u both Indi and IS made my day. 🤗

Aane do...❤️

Waiting for many more. We can never tire of their togetherness and chemistry... SHY...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww Indi mera bachaa how can you write so magically each scene?
It brought me tears I really miss IPKKND and everyone,everything related to it.😭
What a breathtaking poem!!!!!! you made my day DAMMIT

lots of love and a very tight hug,
🤗
Maria
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Posted: 10 years ago
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analyses was marvelous.
lines was dhak dhak.
tfs.
indi52 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KhushiDM

This is my first post that I read to that I started my day 😊 and I must say u both Indi and IS made my day. 🤗

Aane do...❤️

Waiting for many more. We can never tire of their togetherness and chemistry... SHY...



hi khushidm,

thanks for saying that... i was happy madly reading is's post... this aane do... makes us feel and imagine and go crazy.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MariaArHiholic

Awww Indi mera bachaa how can you write so magically each scene?
It brought me tears I really miss IPKKND and everyone,everything related to it.😭
What a breathtaking poem!!!!!! you made my day DAMMIT

lots of love and a very tight hug,
🤗
Maria



maria, you are the sweetest,

you know how i just keep writing and writing... it's all their fault.

you really liked the poems? not classic writing, but in my heart there was something poetic as i keyed in.

thank you... and i just love the way you appear here and there... how is life? miss them badly, don't we.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: zebali

analyses was marvelous.

lines was dhak dhak.
tfs.



hi zebali,

nice to meet you... thanks so much...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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^^^

thank you, maghinalls... miss them and miss them.

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