ArShi OS: Hamesha

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Fantastic OS

love it.

I love Arnav and khushi.

Even though khushi fell in love with Arnav in a very tender age that love didn't loose its intensity and it gradually increase with time.

I like it that khushi didn't hide her feelings from Arnava dn in time express them.

Love it that Khushi stick to its promise and Arnav too fell in love with khushi.

Aman had a very important role in this love story. He made Arnav think that its time he should confess his feeling to khushi. He is truly the best friend of them and Arnav's right hand.

Khushi patience, hard work and immense love bear fruits and finally she became Mrs Arnav Singh Raizada, thats awesome.

I enjoy a lot reading this beautiful tale

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Mints23

@mints23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Oh that was too good - the whole story is beautifully narrated in just one shot

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Such a beautiful story...loved it.

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Uthra Di...this is amazing...the whole journey...from their first meeting to wedding...each bit of it is so beautifully written...loved it so much...thank you Di, for writing this...

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Res 🤗

Edited!

Firstly, I had no idea that you were writing an OS on my b'day. So thanks a ton for writing this OS and dedicating it to me. I cannot express the happiness I am experiencing now 🤗

Secondly, I think the khushi you've portrayed here has same ambitions as mine. So is she inspired by me?😛

Now to the OS...
It was a full story. Starting from her teenage years, when he'd already completed his PG, I saw oh the great age difference..
I liked this practical minded, wise arnav. Without even insulting her feelings for him, he made her understand the importance of her career, which she was going to sacrifice because her heart was taking over *facepalm*.
And then she did what arnav said, worked hard that is. And as he'd said, she met aman mathur, who later became her best friend, well sort of. I dreaded when you stopped at the point saying he proposed her. I was like, one more obstacle? So are we going to see a DDLJ wala scene?😛

But oh no, aman acted as a true friend in bringing out what khushi felt for arnav. And I loved the fact that he reprociated her feelings. And they got married blissfully, only to be with each other...Hamesha.

I am so happy to have met you on this virtual forum. GM, I love you 🤗 Thanks for all these wishes *cries khushi ke aanso*😃

Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago

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jtmbarun

@jtmbarun

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

WOW!!! Superb OS, Uthra di!!😊

It was a complete lifetime story and that too in one Os only..

Khushi's emotions and feelings were very well-written..And Arnav was so understanding and kind..

I also like the fact that there was no negative character in it..Everyone was nice and sweet..

It was just awesome and perfect!!!

I really enjoyed reading it..

You write so well,dear!!! Continue writing more beautiful stories like this!!

Thank you so much!!🤗

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RasgullaSP

@Rasgulla_sp

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Yeh kya likh diya tune??? Haiye 😳

The first thought I actively registered while reading it is the age difference between them. Phir maine socha bhaad main jaaye duniya... 😛 As long as they dont mind...

My next thought was this idiom I had read a long time back 'Old love, cold love; calf love, half love'... Khushi's feelings were those initially- only half love; for which she was ready to change the course of her career and her life. 😕 I know Arnav is irresistable with a perfect family thrown in the package, but I guess I am too practical...

The thought after that was Arnav is such a sensible soul. Through Khushi's rose tinted glasses you had shown how perfect he is in everyway. But with Arnav's words you showed how wise he is. He saw to it that this weight of a 'puppy calf' (yeah I am creative 😉) didnt hamper her growth as a career-woman and as a woman. He went ahead and guided her too 👏

Then the next thought was What the! 😲 Aman! 😡 Then I breathed a sigh of relief... Phew! Arnav loves Khushi as much as she loves him and she is NOT getting married to Aman... Tu ne toh mujhe daraa hi diya 😡

For Khushi it was love at first sight but for Arnav even I dont want to know when and how he fell in love. Probably he followed Mr. Darcy from Pride and Prejudice: "'I cannot fix on the hour, or the spot, or the look, or the words, which laid the foundation. It is too long ago. I was in the middle before I knew that I had begun."

Whattay OS! Loved it! ❤️

PS: ArHi hamesha. Bas!

PPS: Happy Birthday once again Ms. Jha 😛

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

beautiful wriiten os...

really heart touching...even after soo many years khusi couldnt think of loving anyone except arnav and arnv too understood and fallen in love with her...

thanks to aman they finally got together...

they were meant for each other humesha