ArShi OS: Hamesha

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

I really don't know how you manage it.

Writing a whole story in a one shot.

Loved it.

This serious and poised Arnav is the right foil for an exhuberant and impulsive Khushi.

This is what one hopes and prays for.

Finding the love of one's life and marrying him.

But Arnav didnot let Khushi go astray in her young emotions.

She made a career for herself, achieved all that she wished and hoped for.

Only then did he declare his love for her.

And love Aman for acting as the catalyst.

Very sweet story.

I really loved reading it.

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Hetal

@Divyahet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

edited my comment on page no. 3😊

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FeistyDewdrop

@FeistyDewdrop

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

oh dear... This is immensely heartwarming...!!!!

l loved the 1st person narrative very very much...

Arnav had been this very responsible guy who acted not on his fancies but very maturedly handled Khushi guidong her rightly at a very crucial juncture in her life... Khushi was merely acting according to her age which made her get carried away by her emotions... Here iam stressing upon her career choice n not mocking her genuine affections for Arnav...

beautifully potrayed emotions akka!!! :))

aaannnd very eagerly waiting fr ur ss/ff to get started sooon :)) :))

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Ireena

@Ireena.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

This brought tears to my eyes! You are an amazing writer!👏

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Lovely story!

Entire story encapsuled in a post!

Loved it to bits!

Loved the way Arnav guided Khushi without putting her in a bind but letting her explore her avenues and be there when she zeroed in on him.

Patience - a virtue that distinguishes this Arnav!

Wishes to Birthday Girl dj_arshifan

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

oh wow that was beautiful
waise for a minute even i was scared that she was marrying aman
that arnav doesnt love her
but that wasnt the case
glad they had that talk though
and due to that she was focused on her studies
in the end she did get him
he loved her but was ready to let her go if she loved another
lucky for him she didnt
cheers for pm

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Such a beautiful n meaningful os, viji!!
Thx for penning it!!

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Downhill

@Downhill

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

simply superb
loved it
that was beautiful

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smat

@smat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Brilliant OS
thanks for the pm

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mem1

@mem1

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#40

That was very cute U! Such a 'feel-good' story. you had me a little worried for a second with the whole 'Aman-proposal' bit, but of course, we know it will be Arnav and Khushi - Hamesha...

Fell in love once again with DevyaniJi and her grandchild(ren) 😉

Such a mature Arnav, who knew how to handle Khushi wonderfully... he loved and supported her and let her to her goals, not letting her get distracted. Really loved this OS!!!!