Vignettes - 23. Mera Beta ( English Translation updated)

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Lovely OS Aparna... I can see why this is one of your personal favourites. The warmth and care oozing from this OS was wonderful. Arnav Singh Raizada surely has come a long way from being ASR to Shashi Gupta's son..😊

Loved, loved, loved it..👏

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Cute6

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

aparna dii you made me cry..i dont know why but after i finished reading it i found my eyes moist..this is the power of your writing and they have deep impact on me atleast..and yes this is the most beautiful one..i always loved the bonding you show between the inmates of shantivan thru your words and this one is no exception..

this one warmed the cockles of my heart..this must be probably the only os on this forum on shahi arnav relationship and it is a top class writing...

each tym i read anything from you i feel kash yaar aparna dii nikalti yeh serial...

loved it to fullest

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shr1234

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

So sweet. I loved how you developed Arnav's relation with his in-laws, him accepting them as parents and eventually becoming the son of Gupta household :) Really touching!

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skmr.bs

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

That was again amazing...the way wrote it from Shashi's ppint of view was great...Arnav and Aakash truly became his sons. This was truly beautiful.

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Your take and depiction of the story is unique and I always like it.

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Anukriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

I was studying for my exams and was away from IF from few days. I logged in today and found three of your OS's link in my PM box and this story touched my heart. In Indian culture, a daughter-in-law's personality is totally merged in her in-law's family usually but a son-in-law is treated differently in a honey-clad way, too sweetly, nor they are told about family problems, nor they are included in private matters.
While reading this OS my eyes welled up. Loved how 'uncle' and 'aunty' became 'amma' and 'babuji'.

A very sweet story and yes it became my personal story too and I think it would become a favorite with every girl who reads it

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jg12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Absolutely beautiful - wish they had shown this.

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shutter

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Hello ji...

Got a bit late with the comments... Apologies...

But what to do... I was so lost in the beauty of the story that no words seemed enough in its favour!!!!!! Hence the delay...

But, I think this one has to be the best out of the entire OSs and SSs and FFs you have written so far... (Okay... Don't throw eggs n chappals!!! 🤣)

Starting at the beginning... It was a pleasant surprise to see Shashi travelling by train and that young couple for once seemed to be Arnav and Khushi... But then lightening struck and my brain said ASR won't travel in a train with his wife, even to Lucknow!!!!!🤪

Not to mention that I was still caught unawares by the identity of the travelers... 👏

Shashi reminiscing about the past is not as significant as the way his thoughts and feelings associate themselves with his family, his daughter's family!!!!!! Poignant prose...

Arnav Singh Raizada!!!! The ruthless, cold and calculative business tycoon has transformed in a way that could give the quintessential 'Knight in shining armour' a run for his money!!!!😉

What transition... Beauutiiffuuulll...👏😳

These words "gentle young man who held an ocean of love in his heart into their lives" perfectly describe the kind of man that Arnav is!!!!!! *Encore* 👏 👍🏼

All I can say is that this was magnifique!!!!🤗🤬

Huh... I hope this doesn't sound crappy!!!!😆