Vignettes - 23. Mera Beta ( English Translation updated)

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Tia Maharaj

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This OS was definitely not a sad one...but for some reason, I kept on crying after reading it...I guess it really touched my heart❤️😊 good work!!!😃I love your Os series😊

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Sugi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Awesome os...Loved d relationship between Arnav and Shashi 😊

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ambili123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

well he is like a dream sun in law how can not call him son loved it hey can u update in the last os abt next update nowadays i am missing ur updates frequently

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abby2181

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Excellent work. I always wondered about how the relationship between Khushi's dad and Arnav would develop and you described it far better than my imaginings. Both men are important to Khushi and their equation needed to be defined. (Thanks for the PM. I was travelling and could not comment earlier).

Hope to read more of your work soon.

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Fau Zi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

Beautiful, simply beautiful, teared up my eyes when he said mera beta!!!

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Arshi67

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Loved how you wrote about the transition of mera damaad to mera beta. I found it really emotional. Just struck a chord with me. Arnav's innate goodness come through.

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..sweetchilly..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Even if he called them Uncle and Aunty, Arnav by his actions had proved that they had the position of Father and Mother & finally he addressed them as Babuji and Amma..that was really great:)
Sashi's POV was so well potrayed.
Loved it..<3

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Shraya Biswas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Very very very very very nice OS!!! :)
this side of Arnav, his feelings towards Khushi's parents were beautifully written...also how Shashi sensed Arnav's inner turmoils and emotions were too nice... :)
loved it sooo much!

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akleoawm

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

Outstanding! A great account of Shashi and Arnav's relationship!

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@addicted25

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Posted: 10 years ago

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😃 JUST BEAUTIFUL. Arnav finally calling Khushis parents Ama a babuji, and in return Shashi calling him Beta. OOH I think alot of ladies would have like to see the pool scene-even if it was just a picture.😉. Getting back to the story I liked this closing the loop os. ARNAV healing his bitter memories of people he trusted. REALLY BEAUTIFUL.

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