Vignettes - 23. Mera Beta ( English Translation updated) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Absolutely awesome, you wrote this with essence on what if! What if this really happened, what conversation would have taken place, what would have happened to Shyam upon Babuji gaining the ability to talk. I had tears in my eyes, Shashis emotions were so well described...
There really are genuine son in laws like Arnav and Akash and then there is Shyam...and you really Had me believe it was Khushi and Arnav in the train!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: aruni50218

Aparna, THIS was the OS you were holding back??




Becausethis is one of my dream-comes-true moment, and I'm sure it is the same for most of the other readers too.

Do I even need to say, LOVED IT TO BITS. Finally Babuji got well (I was really angry with CVs for keeping his character as an invalid without giving him a proper closure. But then, when have they ever?), his side of the story is out, I got to see the bond between Khushi's family and Arnav growing... and their life got back to normal - or better than it was before Arnav and Khushi met for the first time.

Everything you had described about the recovery was so relatable, and something we could see really happening in the show, like Babuji being treated in Arnav's farmhouse (if only they use a farmhouse, instead of RM, that is 😆), and opening up a mithai business in Delhi and Lucknow again...

My favourite part was when the young couple realised who Babuji is, and their reaction when Arnav came to pick him up. I liked the same thing in your previous OSs too - the "Uninvited Visitors" and the "Frequent Flyer".

Can we get a Bua ji - Arnav OS too?? 😳

About popular demand - Aparna dear, you know na, we are the insatiable fandom who demanded more and more Arshi time when the show was on air. If we got our way, we would have Arnav-Khushi romance whole 20 min of the episode 5 days a week and even that won't be enough. I guess its the same here too. I personally love your style of writing and every new character you have brought so far are very relatable too. But had you asked me to name my favorites among your vignettes, it will be all the OSs about Arshi. I loved HRN, but I love this OS more. But that shouldn't stop the flow of the stories you have planned. I hope you understand my point.

About confusing me - I am one confused soul these days, unfortunately this will be my state for the whole of next year too... this is me stressed out, sleep deprived, and exhausted, trying to find some solace through the sapnon ki duniya here in IF. And yeah you did got me wondering whether this is Arnav and Khushi in the first part... But "Hai Devi Maa" did warn me 😆


LOVED LOVED LOVED it.
Lots of hugs and kisses 🤗
Next update kab hain?



I was going through the comments on this OS and I have to say ditto to your comments Aruni and 1000% on the red part.

Aparna, next OS make it on Bauji and Arnav. I would have loved to see some story for Buaji and Arnav, something where Arnav frets and worries over Buaji or her health and Buaji draws solace from Arnav. I know you have touched upon this for HRN but still a full fledged OS to banta hain boss.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Beautiful ! Just cannot express my feelings.
It is amazing how you create a world of human emotions in such a short story !!
Thanks a lot for the update and the PMs
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
i dont know what to say, im just speechless. i have never read anythin in this forum that has described such a beautiful relationship between khushi's father and arnav. the way shashi accepted arnav as his son was so touching. im in love with this os and will be forever!! this made my day or my week maybe!!! haha absolutes amazing!! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
that was so sweet...
i loved th OS..
but lets be honest...i loved loved and loved
the last line...
"kaha tha nahi maanega...mera beta.."
one can visualise how sweetly mr.Gupta would have
said this...
it was wonderful...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
I must say that you have outdone yourself with this one. This is definitely one of my favorites as well. I always wanted to see how Arnav and Shashi's relationship would have progressed and after reading this I would have wanted it to happen exactly this way.

I always felt like Arnav had a good relationship with Buaji but a reserved one with Khushi's parents. I enjoyed reading how you improved their relationship and how slowly over time Arnav began to see them as his parents and they began to see him as their son.


I have to say that you are the best at writing about Arnav. The way you add small things as the people clearing his way adds so much to the "ASR" image. I felt like the makers were really good at showing that Arnav was well-known and respected at the beginning of the show but lost touch with that at towards the end. But you do complete justice to that aspect.

Thank you for another masterpiece and impatiently waiting for the next!

PS: Just saw you started a new SS! Will read soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
wow...mera beta..sach mein...touchwood...

amma , babuji...always wanted that to hear from arnav...



what happened to dhruv's story u promised?[i am not complaining wokay😉]
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
This one brought tears to my eyes and I am no wilting flower to cry on drop of hat.
The emotions flowed thought the whole story was so deep and heart felt and your wonderful writing was just awesome. You took so much care in writing this very sensitive piece that I became oblivious to all the things around me, such was the power of your writing that engaged my mind to that degree.
The transition ASR went through was wonderful and the way it was supported silently by the whole family was fabulous. The love that flown between out lovely couple was beautiful and they proved that they are soul mates in true sense, the way they started their journey and both of them went on an emotional roller coaster, the hell Khushi wen to and the guilt Arnav had to go through.. they both came above it all and managed to salvage their battered hearts and marriage..Khushi gave Arnav the biggest gift of all 'forgiveness' and also helped him to forgive himself, which was key for them to then forget and be able to move on.
To say that I loved this OS will be an understatement but truly you need to get a round of applause for writing this and I do hope that you get to rad my comment as am posting it late.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
It definetely became one of my favorites... nicely penned...
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Sigh...

That was lovely Aparna. Thank you. I dont know what else to say - which part to comment on. Each and every line was lovingly thought of and even more lovingly penned.

Thank you.

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