Vignettes - 23. Mera Beta ( English Translation updated)

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Simran

@dmg123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Awesome chapter!!

I so liked the interaction between Arnav and Shashi! I also liked the flashbacks when Arnav referred to them as Babuji and Amma! It was so sweet :)

The ending was perfect!

Lol, I thought the couple in the beginning was Arnav and Khushi 😆

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clover

@clover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

This was an awesome story. Loved the way you wrote about Shashi's recovery, and Arnav acceptance of his new set of parents.😊

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

What a beautiful OS. Heart warming and full of happy thoughts. The pain of the past was skimmed over and the present was so thoughtfully laid out. This is a beautiful OS. I'm still crying. I loved how you ended. Mera beta - His son, jogging up to him... That one word sums up the emotions and feelings of Arnav towards his father-in-law and by association, his love for Kushi.

Beautiful.

Thank-you.

And yeah, I prefer your OS's anytime!

I think because of the pace and due to the fact that it has the closure immediately. Whenever I read your OS's, I go through the gamut of emotions - all of them - in the entirety, and in the end, I can actually sigh with relief. Even though, I maybe shedding tears at the end, or have a dinosaur stuck in my throat... sometimes, they may be happy tears or dinosaurs!

When you write, you have the gift of describing things with the least amount of words - I know exactly what you are trying to say, even though you may only use a few words. It's the emotions that your writing evokes that makes me read your work over and over again! And since I prefer immediate closure, I love your OS's!

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

again a wonderful piece. u really love arnav too like all of us. ur portrayal is so sweet

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Chandu2000

@Chandu2000

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Lovely os !! Very beautiful !!

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ForLoveofBarun

@ForLoveofBarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

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A truly touching and moving OS. Very well written from Shashiji's perspective.👏 It was heartwarming to see Shashiji back on his feet. I thought even in the show the understanding he had of Arnav's state of mind and love for his daughter was very evident. Glad you mention that here.

That Arnav - he is a treasure. *sigh*

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

this is a really sweet vignette. It really shows the love between the Guptas and their son-in-laws. Akash contantly provides his support. While Arnav goes all out to find a doctor and help Shashi, he is not the only one who holds his father-in-law's hand. Akash is on the other side. Both regard Shashi and Garima as amma and babuji, though Akash says it from the start and Arnav's actions show his regard for them.

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sonia_1

@sonia_1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Awesome OS⭐️

' Mera Beta' ...Awww... Arnav Singh Raizada !

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farheen75

@farheen75

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

It was just amazingly beautiful... The love and warmth that this story had was just so so fabulous, I just loved it.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#50

i did think the young couple as arhi too
but you sure cleared that up
his son sure never listens
so he did come to pick his babuji up
awww they sure had bonded closer the family
which happened gradually

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