Vignettes - 21. A Stitch in time

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

What an absolutely great OS Appu...I loved how you brought a very important social cause into the whole story.

Your OS always have me thinking ke kash we had got to see something like this in the show.

If only the CVs had dealt with all the various side characters they way you do.

No Arnav-khushi but still the OS was fab. Well written indeed.

Thanks for the PM.

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awesome OS dear 😳

loved it to the core

very well written

thanks for the PM

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Bavari

@Bavari

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nice one. Thanks for the PM.

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Hriju321

@Hriju321

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Very nice Aparna.Payal with a spine and the CSR initiative taken up by her is commendable.
Keep up the good work 😊

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Its simply superb! Had a faint smile all through the reading.

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Param

@pup03

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

nice OS !!! arnav is so understanding and the way he supported payal was beautiful.. loved it..

thanks for pm 😊

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Yes I was expecting something different at the beginning but never mind I hope that expectation will be fulfilled soon 😳 Nice OS. It explores the depth of Payal's character and also her relationship with her family--something that was never done in the show. I liked it very much when Akash supported her and said that its ok to say no to Arnav rather than forcing her to accept Arnav's offer because he is his bhai. Loved it. Thanks for the PM :)

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

It's nice I liked it...a very well thought PayAl track...

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Cute6

@Cute6

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

aparna dii this was beautiful once again and as said by you it was hatke..this must be probably the first os i must have read giving the insight of payal and akash's relationship and u made me fall in love with them more than before❤️ and for the first time i dint miss arnav khushi in this..it felt so good to read this one..😊

and this time wen i read the starting i was confident that they wer not arnav khushi 😆 but i thot them to be nk-pooja

ever since i read your dhruv vala story i fell in love with pratiksha and wen it made an apperance in this i smiled more😃

you did full justice to payal's character and i hope you will rite more of akash payal's os's in future becoz dii this was classy one👍🏼

your next os, you wanted to rite it from long tym..mm it seems that the wait till thursday will be worth it..so im vaiting for it...😆

and dii being a stalker to your stories is worth it..they are a drug to which m addicted so wen i dont get the regular dose of thursdays and mondays i become restlesss😉😛

vaiting for the next