Vignettes - 21. A Stitch in time

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IPKWA

@IPKWA

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

I was waiting for the English version but I just couldn't wait anymore. I think I understand most of the Hindi dialogues but will definitely read the English version once you post it.

I really like that you give everyone a chance in your stories instead of sidelining them. I enjoyed reading the Payal and Akash relationship. I think it is such a beautiful relationship and it's awesome you are exploring it.

I love how you've given importance to Payal and have chosen to make her something more than a housewife. It's absolutely heartwarming to know that she wants her boutique to be apart of their charity.

I am impatiently waiting for your next one shot! I have a feeling I know what it is going to be about so I am excited to read it !

-Maya

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abby2181

@abby2181

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

I am reading an OS on Payal and Akash after a long time. You are the one of the few writers who does them justice.

You have highlighted their steadfast yet deep love very well.

Both characters were left unexplored in the TV series. I am glad that you have given them a chance via an OS.

Great work as always.

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Wonderful one shot which was so heart touching and I loved it.

What a great idea Payal came up with which made the whole family so proud of her and also showed that what a beautiful person she is inside and out.

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Hugs hugs hugs for the thought and story concept!

beautifully written!

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Shraya Biswas

@ShrayaBiswas

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Very nice OS! Loved the title scene of being on Payal-Akash..! :D
loved everything!

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IlIlIl

@IlIlIl

Sparkler

+ 10

Posted: 5 years ago

#36

opened on TM's request smiley9

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 4 years ago

#37

A Stitch in time

Loved what Payal did the idea. She helped a lot of women at the same time.

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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 4 years ago

#38

Loved this OS . It showed the Gupta sisters in a new light ,and their talent being appreciated. All thanks to Pooja who was the one who first told Payal how her work was appreciated and of course followed by Arnav who put forward a proposition that she could design clothes and sell it under brand name of AR.

Though Payal took time to think about Arnav’s proposition her answer not only surprised Arnav but impressed him.

Payal in this story has been shown as an independent and a talented woman who is supported by Aakash.