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ChaiBiskoot thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
congratulations to the winners 🤗
and risha.. u simply rock with ur writing skills ,, congoz to u 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

😊

First of all, I am simply delighted that two of the stories I voted for were by Mints and Sami- Love you both for your own unique writing styles.😃And please bear with me while I talk about them...😃


Sami- I love your sense of humour and your ability to make people laugh - I laughed aloud😆 reading The Language of Love...and that is why, I voted for yours as the best in the comedy genre in this contest...in my humble opinion, it simply is... 👍🏼Well written, no loopholes and really really funny. The simplicity of your title stood out for me...really the no-nonsense kind. 👏And yes, poetry is certainly the language of love...loved how you used it here and got everyone in the IPK family infected with the poetry madness...simple superb😆 Bankelal and Kamlesh Khabri indeed😆 Always wondered how Arnav would react if he actually met Bankelal- handsome and oh-so different from what he imagined him to be! Arnav's poem in the end was surely the icing on this particular cake!⭐️ (BTW, I hate paan!)😛


Mints: 👏What can I say...I simply loved your story! When I saw the title, Love is...I knew I would read it (For those who may not know-- Love is.. is a very famous cartoon strip by Kim Casali...really cute and adorable...u will see images printed on cards, mugs, souvenirs, its famous...the world over) Second- it brought to mind a movie "Love Actually" with two of my favorite actors, Colin Firth and Hugh Grant...and I am a sucker for Love...😳

I loved this concept of a past where he had hurt her, although unintentionally, and the present where they meet again, on equal footing...loved a successful Khushi.👍🏼..loved the fact that Arnav is reserved but a nice person at heart...the way the misunderstanding is cleared with no sense of false pride or ego...beautiful characters, set against the backdrop of the fashion industry, and a lovely complete story. The concept of romance was beautifully captured in all the slight touches all through the story- the looks, the memories. I especially liked the way you brought about the progress in their relationship, to the end - a most romantic proposal...😳 I wish I wish...


And my third selection - As it Comes...by Areeba_Blossom- I haven't read any of her stories but will certainly read some...again your title - short and intriguing😊 (for me)...is what made me read it...I do not normally read tragedies but did go through all of them in this contest...the sense of hope, of moving past a big tragedy is what I liked most in this story. Also, I thought her story fit the tragedy quote really well...a couple who lose their child, I liked how you showed the natural emotions they would go through, her wihdrawal, his anger and frustration, the utter helplessness...yes, I did wonder what happened in those three years, how they overcame this, but the happiness in their future, made me happy too...Loved the reference to tulips and roses...nice touch!👍🏼

Congratulations to Dee and Ana for the special mentions.🥳

To all the writers who shared their stories - a big thank you...this definitely would have been a big challenge for you all...when one writes, words pour out and the restriction on length would have probably been the hardest to stick to...without losing the essence of the story, there is so much to be conveyed...👏

The judges --great efforts on your part, especially with time constraints and also having to maintain your sense of fairplay and ethics.👏👏👏

I would like to definitely mention LazyLeaves - the way you listed down your comments on each entry - wonderful...I could see the efforts that you have made to read each individual story and come up with constructive comments...yes I agree with you, I do wish some of them would be made into Short Stories...in fact, after reading your comments, I read the stories again...😊

Lastly- Manjari...thank you for this contest👏
Since you were the moderator it would have been tough on you too to coordinate everything, to follow-up, to ensure that evaluation and re-evaluation were done fairly. And then to ensure that results were delivered on time. 👏

to the readers...without whom, this contest could not have been completed👏👏👏

I do have one request, Manjari
Pls share the results... the scoresheets here?
As readers, we have voted openly for stories we liked and certainly would appreciate, if the scores were shared openly as well. It would make us all very happy to know how our selections fared.

Thanks

Edited by chitrajay - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

CONGRATULATIONS TO THE WINNERS👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster




I am taking the initiative of answering this but If I get wrong somewhere, Manji could correct it. 😃

After getting my scorecard, I think.
For the most popular OS, only the member votes were considered. 'Price of Happiness' got most votes and so this is our 'Most Popular OS'.

For the Winner OS 2013, Member votes + Judges score were summed up and the highest scorer is our Winner OS.

The winner OS from each genre were decided by the judges only(I am not sure about this one)

And special mention were given to the OS which on overall got high score (member's vote+judges score)but not high enough to be a winner..

Similar was the procedure for top ten OSs.

The top ten highest scorer among 26 were listed.

That was all. 😊

P.S. (Manji please correct me if I am wrong at some portion)


You are true

but for the special mentions from what i got were taken in mind just the judges votes and not the readers because how come a story that got 116 votes from the judges and 2 from the readers got a mention, when another story which got 98 votes from the judges and 18 from the readers was not taken in account.

I know i'm going to be the person who is going to ruin this happy atmosphere, but I grew up learning that you should always say what you really think and especially when you feel that an injustice has been done.

Accordingly to what i think and what i saw(votes), the special mention should have gone to entry n. 20.

I just want an answer from when the judges votes became more important then the readers votes? I'm not offending the judges, indeed i thanks them for taking the time to read all the OSs.

When the concept started i thought that, the winner and the run up would have announced taking in account readers votes and the special mention would have done by the judges, but seems like at the end the readers vote count nothing

I'm sorry but this is the reality and this is what i think.
Edited by Preet.Kc - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster




Thanks a lot for mentioning me..
Feels awesome. 😊

-Kiran


ur most wlcm 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76


Thank you!!!
That was quick
Will read through n comment later
😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
congratulations to the winners I just loved price of happiness n all other which won
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
congrats to all the winners

Entry 23. Where was the poem? I missed that! I wanted that! Again, this one required more parts than one. Give it a try and turn it into an SS and it will be very good :) A little more attention on the grammar and you will gain many more readers for this one :)

@ lazyleaves thnks for your review, I appreciate it. the only reason i didnt wrote about poem was that someone will surely write on. secondly i know it was write in a rush and i knew it needed more parts and i will defiantly try to write it.

and thankyou whoever voted for me
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
Congratulations to all the winners!
And a big thank you to all the other writers..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Thanks for this opportunity. Thanks to the judges, the writers, winners and all ,especially our IPK for inspiration.

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