arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

WOW. I actually forgot all I wanted to say. I am truly speechless. So much has happened in a single update. Believe it or not I am trying to type at least a few words for the past 10 minutes but I can't seem to find any words. So I'll just say hats off 👏

Sorry for my terrible feedback or the lack of it. But congratulations on reaching the second thread 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: cheesemad
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Wow new thread, congo didi:)
Will read tomorrow and update my comment:D

Edited.
Loved the update.
Loved the fatback. Arnav cancelled the engagement.
Wow Shyam is in jail now, good for him.
What happened that night? really eager to know.
Continue soon:)

hi komal,

thanks so much 😃🤗

yes, there was no engagement and she thought he was a lech...

had to put shyam away, this whole bail thing is so terrible in the case of certain criminals, like shyam.

and what happened that night at sheesh mahal... now that shyam has opened his mouth and spewed venom... we need to find out... vague pictures in my head, still clarifying.

see you soon, and glad you enjoyed.

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javeria

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Super superb update .love it.👏

Thank god arnav wasn't going a lone to kill Shyam. It was all his brilliant plan to hand him over back to police and making sure he would never come out to harm his family and most importantly Khushi. Brilliant plan.👍🏼

Another mystery has started . Sheesh mahal hold many secrets. Did Khushi have any link with them.

waiting eagerly for the next update.

Story is getting very interesting.

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ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

i will start reading his story today and comment again...thank you for sending pm

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: chitrajay
First - congratulations on the new thread!

👏

I had full faith in you...and in Arnav Singh Raizada...a man inherently good...even all that harshness, that cruelty he sometimes showed...all triggers by memories, reacting to the past, perhaps...?

I really liked how you actually brought in closure with Shyam...a man now out on bail...and for once, Arnav Singh Raizada's shaatir dimaag is working really well...(I know, I know...that phrase is a cliche, that has been done to death by now...but totally apt here, I think)😃

And we find that Shyam has moved on...to another victim...like Anjali...
I loved how Arnav manages to get him to confess all his misdeeds...loved how it had all been an elaborate plan to hook him, completely. To put him away...for entirety! And in the bargain, managing to save another gullible young woman too.

I loved that scene for the closure it must have given Anjali...so needed for her, or else how is she to ever get past old feelings...

Shyam does manage to leave some damage behind ...with his reference to their parents' deaths...so is there ever going to be peace for this family???
Memories of the past never go away, entirely...we just learn to deal with them better...time is certainly a great healer...and with it also comes a certain wisdom.. Be it Arnav who is still bound by memories of his painful childhood, be it Anjali who is bound by memories of her marriage and a man she once loved more than life, or be it Khushi, who remembers the struggle to find her ;love with Arnav, trying to do the right thing has always been difficult...but these three will prevail...and are on their way to finding peace surely.

Loved how she comforts him...how he needs cleansing after dealing with Shyam...he doesn't want to taint HER, their love with anything that is evil, unclean...
Arnav is truly a good man...and while he does have grey shades, and probably will always attack, if his loved ones are provoked, but never will he be capable of cold and calculated murder.
No...not he...😃

not cold, calculated murder, but a murder of passion... may be.😳

thanks chitra, that was an astounding and most generous comment...

you felt what i felt about anjali. you know this other girl thing sort of was roaming in my mind, pretty early in, i knew shyam would be using her to get another free boarding lodging scene, i also knew asr will figure it out along the way.

when i wrote anjali also came with khushi, i had no roe for her clearly in my head... then as i wrote, it came... her letting go of shyam... her figuring out there was something the other girl also suffered in shyam's hand.

the way they showed anjali get over shyam in a jiffy... abnormal. okay, sometimes, just to cope we may do bizarre things, but it does tell on us, eat away at us. she did love shyam truly... he was the first and only man in her life and he did make her deliriously happy. i know women who have lived with alcoholics and wife beaters and womanisers just because maybe one of those three conditions were met. here she let him go finally i believe because he killed her child, but surely something lingered? even if it was a wrtetched feeling, one full of shaame and horror?

after this break of almost a year, after putting some self worth back into her life with that management class and involvement with ar, she saw shyam possibly clearly for what he was... a nothing. and let the feelings go... i don't know... but i hope it was a major inflection point in her life.

shatir he is. no cliche... that's our man.

that "cleansing"... after you bury or cremate someone, you are supposed to bathe... i had a feeling of that as i wrote. that and a terrible numbness in him. it's all been too much. yes he certainly did not want that filthy an's anything to taint her in any way.

thank you so much.

that faith in me... awww... mmm uuummm, ami kintu ekdom writer writer noi... golpo lekhar cheshta kori.

i will most probably go for shondhi pujo... if you're in town and coming, do let me know, we'll find some mami ji detectiviya way to find each other. 😳

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: RizArshi
WOW. I actually forgot all I wanted to say. I am truly speechless. So much has happened in a single update. Believe it or not I am trying to type at least a few words for the past 10 minutes but I can't seem to find any words. So I'll just say hats off 👏

Sorry for my terrible feedback or the lack of it. But congratulations on reaching the second thread 😳

rizarshi, first a hug🤗

poor baby, you are sounding winded. just too much happened this chapter, na? well somewhere i my head was the night of the forced wedding, the avalanche of happenings, and the pressure they created.

this was such a moment in their lives i felt... in terms of complex emotions all interlaced, and shyam the antagonist who actually single handedly messed all their lives.

thank you foe reading. no need to give lengthy feedback if nothing coes to mind... what i really wish to know is did you enjoy yourself or not.

thank you so much for reading. and that "hats off."

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Super superb update .love it.👏
Thank god arnav wasn't going a lone to kill Shyam. It was all his brilliant plan to hand him over back to police and making sure he would never come out to harm his family and most importantly Khushi. Brilliant plan.👍🏼
Another mystery has started . Sheesh mahal hold many secrets. Did Khushi have any link with them.
waiting eagerly for the next update.
Story is getting very interesting.

superb superb... oh i like the sound of that, javeria.

thanks for liking and this time round he wasn't going to let shyam get the better of him... he amost did, then he pulled back and thought... he imagined khushi's plight and somehow that made him think cogently. his positive attachments i guess have a constructive positive effect on him.

yes, another mystery... sheesh mahal looms. i so want to see what happened there. 😆

thanks for liking the plan. yay.

see you soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: ranogill
i will start reading his story today and comment again...thank you for sending pm

thanks so much, ranogill... please do read if you find the time or the mood 😳. just wanted to let you know about this story.

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RizArshi

@RizArshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: indi52

rizarshi, first a hug🤗

poor baby, you are sounding winded. just too much happened this chapter, na? well somewhere i my head was the night of the forced wedding, the avalanche of happenings, and the pressure they created.

this was such a moment in their lives i felt... in terms of complex emotions all interlaced, and shyam the antagonist who actually single handedly messed all their lives.

thank you foe reading. no need to give lengthy feedback if nothing coes to mind... what i really wish to know is did you enjoy yourself or not.

thank you so much for reading. and that "hats off."😳

Hello Di,

The thing is I wanted to say so many things that I didn't know where to start and where to stop. But rest assured I have enjoyed every bit of it and you are most welcome 😳