arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sohara

i know i'm crazy and do lot of silly mistakes.
It should be dose not doze.😆

🤣 dose it is then.

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Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Thanks for the PM Indrani. Congratulations on the new thread!!!!!! Totally luved this update. I am glad that we are getting to see all of the things that we did not get to see in IPK. Loved Shyams confession to all of his crimes. In IPK shyams confession was just not adequate. Really wanted him to confess not only all of the harm that he tried to cause Anjali but also how he duped Gupta family and also how he was responsible for putting Khushi's Dad in wheelchair. Glad that you are going to focus on Sheesh Mahal. That was one loop that I felt should have been closed. I know you will do full justice to that. Thank you for completing the kiss by the poolside. Always love to read and picture the romance between ASR and Khushi. That entire scenario from the poolside kiss to khushi's realization that the engagement was not going to happen to ASR's going after Khushi was written very well. Thank you for sharing your story with us.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

rashmi,

thanks so much for that comment and for reading and liking.

i know shyam still has to be revealed as the culprit that push gupta ji into paralysis. i have a feeling this will come up.

i fail to understand how the writers of ipk didn't pass through these fairly obvious points my story does at times... perhaps they were so concentrated on being different just for the sake of it, they completely ignored the wonderful foundation they themselves built. some things had to be visited, for the sake of integrity of a story, but who's tell anyone that. 😕

i am so glad you like the khushi asr things. i so hope they are specific to these two people and not some generic hot stuff.

thank you for reading... i am always grateful that anyone does. 😳

Edited by indi52 - 11 years ago

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binimoti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Congratulation on new thread, itw as an interesting part, Iw as biting my nails, thank God Arnav did not do any thing stupid now what is this Sheesh Mahal suspense, update soon, eager to read more.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

binimoti 😳

hi and thanks for reading and biting nail... hope you did enjoy it though hyuk. will update a little sooner than last time hopefully. i am yet to start on your new story... looking forward.

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wiwy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

🤗 Thread 2, In di🤗

Awww! Congrats! Its a wonderful feeling!

Will read chappy later. Bear with me!

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

^^^

bear with you, wiwy?

hamesha. 🤗

take your time, sir.as and when. i still haven't read your latest, want to... this pm.

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Msserialfan123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

That dhulai was worth the wait indi! I wish I was there too! I hope the twitch is forever out of service!
A truly memorable character that we loved to hate. Frankly I thought the makers let him loose with just 3 slaps ? how could they ?

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cheesemad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

updated my comment on page 1:)

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chitra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#40

First - congratulations on the new thread!

👏

I had full faith in you...and in Arnav Singh Raizada...a man inherently good...even all that harshness, that cruelty he sometimes showed...all triggers by memories, reacting to the past, perhaps...?

I really liked how you actually brought in closure with Shyam...a man now out on bail...and for once, Arnav Singh Raizada's shaatir dimaag is working really well...(I know, I know...that phrase is a cliche, that has been done to death by now...but totally apt here, I think)😃

And we find that Shyam has moved on...to another victim...like Anjali...

I loved how Arnav manages to get him to confess all his misdeeds...loved how it had all been an elaborate plan to hook him, completely. To put him away...for entirety! And in the bargain, managing to save another gullible young woman too.

I loved that scene for the closure it must have given Anjali...so needed for her, or else how is she to ever get past old feelings...

Shyam does manage to leave some damage behind ...with his reference to their parents' deaths...so is there ever going to be peace for this family???

Memories of the past never go away, entirely...we just learn to deal with them better...time is certainly a great healer...and with it also comes a certain wisdom.. Be it Arnav who is still bound by memories of his painful childhood, be it Anjali who is bound by memories of her marriage and a man she once loved more than life, or be it Khushi, who remembers the struggle to find her ;love with Arnav, trying to do the right thing has always been difficult...but these three will prevail...and are on their way to finding peace surely.

Loved how she comforts him...how he needs cleansing after dealing with Shyam...he doesn't want to taint HER, their love with anything that is evil, unclean...

Arnav is truly a good man...and while he does have grey shades, and probably will always attack, if his loved ones are provoked, but never will he be capable of cold and calculated murder.

No...not he...😃

Edited by chitrajay - 11 years ago