arshi ff: without you... #2, chapters 14 - 27 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Newbiesoapfan
WOW WOW WOW!!
Beautiful!!

Full confession ... and Sheesh mahal and the BFTP!!! Loving it!!

thank you so much, ash.

everything... all at once... and why not, we all deserve a treat sometimes, huh? 😳 he loves her terribly... which is why shyam will be able to mess him up wen the time comes... sad. did you say bftp? awww that's the thread where i hang out and go nuts doing ipk... a sense of the blast here? me thrilled.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

Thnx Indi but humari baat abhi khatum nahin huwi hai...

So he is planting another half baked lie in ASR's mind and now we are heading to Sheesh Mahal...

Am I thinking exactly what are you planning here which is another chapter of this story tro be revealed.Thnx for this turn...😊

Poolside...Yeah me...Indi you are going to complete all of yours and our "Tishnagi"...our thirsty desires to see all the incomplete sequences through this story...Then bring it on Thread by Thread...pick each one and complete it...

Take all the time you need...😊

He wanted her and she is pushing him...he pulls her and then makes him angry...he runs after her to see she is fine...or let me say He is fine to see her near his heart...Which has this FEAR of losing his loved ones...What if I've lost you...

I felt something during that fight...Shyam wants revenge from Arnav...and that revenge is very deep...rooted some where in Lukhnow...in Sheesh Mahal's walls...which are witness of it...INDi I am trying to read your brain...after I am with you for a while ...twists are turns in there some how reaching me here...NICE one ...❤️
You are very welcome...and Once again Thnx for puting a lid on this slithery basket...

slithery basket 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

dear detectiviya arshi mami, you are seeing my little tricks, haan? but honestly, i just go with the flow... get a scene in my head and then just write madly, see where it goes. sometimes it feels right, i keep it.

shyam is an intriguing animal. i still don't know who he is really. how dangerous. or not. is his dushmani with asr pld? or just a vile insane jealousy of a man who has it all, while he, a cretin can't even conceive of so much courage and grab life.

both he and asr have similar views on many things. maybe he is as ambitious, juts too inclined to be wrong to do it the right way... shyam will come to me as i go along i presume.

thanks again for all your thoughts and nudges. here's to all our thirst being quenched. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: asha_mehta
Congrats on the new thread
Update was rocking
Continue soon

aw, asha, rocking .

thank you for reading, liking and your wisheea

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Devilways
this was a briliant update.
loved each part of the update from the beginning to the flashback to the end.. perfect!
loved it. great one.
would write more but dont have time.

hi devilways,

thank you so much. i am thrillled you liked it. hope to see you soon... thanks for commenting even while rushing. i appreciate it. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: anu1017
Congrats on the new thread!! Loved the update😊

anu,

thanks a lot. i am always so happy to hear that an update did it for someone. thank you. 😳

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: priyanka1998
superb update
pm mee

hi priyanka,

thank you so much. i will certainly pm you. 😃

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Crazy4IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: indi52

sohara,

that is a deadly comment. thank you, my dear... my replies along your post. i am thrilled you loved this update.

I always love your writing.

So no worriejjj.

Kaan pakar ke maafi chahti hoo for underestimating ASR. And your ASR is always beyond perfect!😉

Or moreover Khushi's love and their regular dose of ahem 🤬 has kept his mind cool and more active I guess.😳

balle balle for Shyam's dholai and ballet for ASR and Khushi's ahem

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sohara
I always love your writing.
So no worriejjj.
Kaan pakar ke maafi chahti hoo for underestimating ASR. And your ASR is always beyond perfect!😉
Or moreover Khushi's love and their regular doze of ahem 🤬 has kept his mind cool and more active I guess.😳
balle balle for Shyam's dholai and ballet for ASR and Khushi's ahem

you are in.cor.rigi.ble.🤗

mad sweet girl. psst, i think you are right about that ahem's effect on the man.