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Posted: 11 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Aww Indi, trees? But of course, why not? I feel trees do listen to you and in some way make a response too. Yes, it was the kitchen window then. Now, it is that window in my parents house I had told you earlier about. A beautiful visual there, coconut trees swaying in the wind, a street with interesting characters passing by and a part of the blue sky visible above. My deep thoughts shared now with this beautiful ensemble.
Something about the water in seas and rivers, be it the waves in the sea or the flow in the rivers, a desire, a want to surge ahead. Although we know that science says water flows from a higher level to a lower level, but we believe that whichever path the river flows, its goal is to reach and unite with the sea. Makes me wonder, naming the lead as Arnav, was it a random choice or a deep thought of a writer behind that?
Khushi's traits, yes I have some in me. But a lot I don't. Wish I had her retaliating trait, I become Payal then. 😆 I did get the hint when you said that I would like this. Thank you for that. Really loved their scenes.
And my mind is already working towards that kahani, got a start. Let me see how it goes. 😳



hellow windows girl,

you must see charulata by satyajit ray. the windows are doorways to who knows what and beyond where. i grew up in wide open skies, green earth, tea plantations, reserve forests, bamboo groves, paddy fields, elephants running wild and snake slithering country... our excitement often was just to drive down the one road amid it all to go see the bride being buiolt across the river... tipling, a tributary of the brahmaputra.

i can't stop looking at nature... despite skyscrapers, despite becoming a city girl.

asr with his plants, i feel him, i know that sense of seclusion and life when you and your plants get together. they have feelings, they talk, they soothe, they tell you not to worry.

arnav is definitely not chosen by chance... fantastic choice... lends itself to a deep wrap with the character, gives the character depth and endlessness... water. way back on crooner we had fascinating chats on the elements and nandalala showed how water was the most potent element of all, even overcoming fire... this was soon after the dousing of matchstick scene during kidnap.

there was always water somewhere near the place where the loved and grew. the poolside, the rain, the, throeing of water on each other... something about this powerful element is part of them.

i want kahani i want kahani. 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: asthagarwal

Beautifully written... 👏



thank you so so much, astha. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: supriya.arshi

Beautiful ⭐️

outstandingly beautiful ⭐️
you do complete justice to their love , their marriage here

wat an OS Indi👏...it has to be the best so far 😳

i loved every word...it was mesmerizing to read wat you write❤️



thanks so much, supriya...

think it's the best? i kind of loved writing it too.

maybe practice improves one?

hugs for that comment and for having so much fun.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: yashal_khan

it was another beautifully written work 😊

loved it



yashal_khan,

thank you so much for reading and enjoying. 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

This is just so beautiful...After a horribly tiring day I came here today and first thing I read is this story...and i'm feeling so good...its really soothing...the way you mentioned the river Yamuna is really amazing...Khushi's staying back despite her wish...missing him...longing for him...then remembering the hate marriage day...his coming back to her as he couldnt just not come...that day his eyes was full of anger...and pain...he was disgusted with her...but at the same time he felt "you're mine, mine"...such overwhelming feelings...And his regret how could he do that...Khushi's sharing her feeling...telling him that what she saw in him that day..."and all i saw for an instant was my husband. mine... mine"...just too beautiful...and their poolside convo...his telling her I love you instead of apologizing...this is the beauty of their relationship...And finally her going to NY with him...Just too awesome...

PS: their scooter ride was a special treat...I loved it...



nishu_shorna,

it gave you joy after a hard day? my story feels like its job somewhere is done. yamuna... i am glad you enjoyed her. i try to enter the specific ties and notes of the asr khushi relationship, it is really engrossing what one finds there. somehow they are both essential to each others sense of happiness, and right now they are in the phase when they are sinking inextricably into each other... i want to see where it all goes. thanks so much for letting a monsoon story unwind you.

scooter ride, yeah... she is off to get ice cream. 😆

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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Sigh* everytime i read OS on after marriage track on just random things and read them being happy...satisfied..loving each other..it feels like we got closure of some things we never got in d show...feel like everything is perfect in our lil arshi world...and flee at peace...
It was beautifully written...loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -aparna-

*Sigh* everytime i read OS on after marriage track on just random things and read them being happy...satisfied..loving each other..it feels like we got closure of some things we never got in d show...feel like everything is perfect in our lil arshi world...and flee at peace...
It was beautifully written...loved it



hmmm, thanks, aparna...😳

sigh is right. well, if someone doesn't give you something, just got to go and get it yourself i guess...

thank you for the lovely thoughts.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks for reading, dreamy 24 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: IronButterfly

Despite her will she chose to stay back to be with his family. Showed how much important things attached to him are for her.

It was so like Arnav to get her a car along the scooter. Because the car would have kept him happy knowing that it will be safe. And the scooter because he can't say no to her.

Beautiful how you expressed their love and longing.
They realize their mistakes. They won't forget them because the scars maybe too deep but they will not let their past rule their present.

The title couldn't have been more apt.

You just created poetry.

Very well written.



awww, ironbutterfly,

you always comment with so much thought and generosity. i was waiting for you to brb 😳. thank you for liking it and the second last line had me sort of very moved and happy.

asr and khushi make me want to explore their feelings, i hope i get them right.

will update the ff and ss tomorrow...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
😳 😃 thank you so much tanya_vi 😳

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