arshi os: a monsoon story - Page 6

Originally posted by: RizArshi

Hello Indi di,

Its always a pleasure to read your stories. Yes life is indeed a little "elomelo". Its never perfect for any one. I think that is what made a monsoon story perfect. I believe a story should be just like that. If you try to perfect it, it will get ruined. Thanks for your reply. Looking forward to reading more of your one shots. I just love them. Another thing I always forget to mention is that I love your siggies. Nice edits 😳

Originally posted by: arshisakshi

thanks 4 pm and sooo lovely story and it is wonderful

Originally posted by: chitrajay

somehow this wedding was always their real wedding to me. always. no matter how full of hurt and terror and suffocation it was. he and she will accept it as they go along... and it will perhaps trigger more and more beauty things as a consequence... as it did here.

@bold
Yes I so agree- perhaps in their love story, as turbulent as a river in full spate, this is how it was meant to be?
Somewhere deep within, each had already acknowledged the other as their other half...
And yes slowly - good memories, happy menories, intense and full of love will heal the past, will build a better and brighter tomorrow - stronger for having come out of the worst trials they could have- like gold which is strengthened by putting through fire.
😊

Originally posted by: DurgaS

Indi, do you know why you thought of me towards the end? Telepathy. Because that's what I did when I was leaving Mumbai, said Goodbye Samundarji.

awww durga ji, where did iu find you. you are the cutest ever.

We used to stay near the beach area. Grew up watching the sea almost everyday. It was visible at a distance through our kitchen window. Would share my deep thoughts with the sea whenever I went to the beach. Your story, especially 'Aate hain Yamunaji' brought back those memories. Thank you. 😊

that kitchen window thing... so that is where the staring started. good for the samundar ji. i have to stay i do stare at rivers and wide open skies, saw a sea for the first time when i was 17 but rivers, oh ever since i was born, i was born in fact right next to the yamuna now that i think of it, no wonder whenever i go to delhi, i try to take alook at it... ah you make me understand why she had to be in a story i wrote because i was touched in my deepest layers.

About the story, loved how you made a character out of the river.

a river is always potent and knowledgeable. thank you.

The little box, how we all would want to have one, so many moments to preserve.

may you have one and me too. 😳

Loved the moment when Arnav opened his arms and Khushi ran to him. Kya socha tha dono ne, that they could manage without each other. Of course, he had to come back. No need to prolong the torture, Khushi had to be with him, always, hamesha.

yes yes and yes.

Loved the description of the temple wedding. And both are sharing their thoughts at that time. Beautifully written about the characteristics of the river in full spate. A river never gets lost. Wow Indi, I love how your words flow in full abundance, never losing way, always reaching its target. Bang on. 👏

thank you, you are so good to the rambler. but yeah, have you noticed how rives know where to go?

Aww, gold bangles and the way he asked her to come with him, loved it. 😳 Again, the last bit in the plane, so depicting Khushi's excitement, very well written.

Indi, you are right about me liking this one. Not only like, I loved it. See how many times I've used the word above. 😳

Originally posted by: indi52

i love that comment as is evident... one of the reasons i thought of you was because i never went into explicit details yet a certain sense of privacy and a man woman thing was there in the nicest way. somehow even the river added to it. i wanted you to read... and now i am delighted you did and samundar ji? hayee you are the thread's khushi ji no doubt. 🤗 okay admission, i talk to trees all the time. please see my red commentwas.