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Arnav_Khushifan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hi indrani,

As usual this is so beautiful. I had a feeling tht you will write something on their first wedding. So glad I got to read it. I had really liked their first wedding also. Yes there was hatred but love was there too. I remember he he held her hand haq se when they were walking toward the family. He knew that she was always his and it always reflected in his actions with her. Thanks for sharing. I am off to read the blast in the past , I know I am in for a treat.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

rashmi,

so good to see you. i tried to pm, but your mailbox is full.

yes that haq se hand holding before walking up to meet the clan. what a shot.

i haven't reached this episode yet on blast. slowly making my way... still at 181... but there's some deadly writing and editing by others... have fun.😳

so glad you read and liked. as far as i am concerned this is their wedding. that i wrote on the anniversary was, believe me, by chance. or ha ha by extreme mad ipk love.

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Putija

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Indi the story was beautiful the way you play with words emotions and sentiments the love so deep they cant stay apart and weaving it to the force marriage superb

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rati123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Simply beautiful !!! I could relate to each and every emotion of Khushi and also Arnav .

There love is simply amazing !

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: chalhov
Indi the story was beautiful the way you play with words emotions and sentiments the love so deep they cant stay apart and weaving it to the force marriage superb

hey chalhov,

thanks for reading and saying that. they can stay apart but barely awww.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: rati123
Simply beautiful !!! I could relate to each and every emotion of Khushi and also Arnav .

There love is simply amazing !

rati, 😳

thank you so much.

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jakhushi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

This one was beautiful Di...poignant yet heartwarming... A tale shimmering with love. Absolutely loved their moments of tenderness before he went away, during his trip and on this return.

Such a beautiful rendition of union of 2 souls... albeit an unconventional ones... On a fateful windy night.

A perfect tale of two hearts...

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Madam Wordsmith!

You leave me admiring your ways with words every time. No fail.

A story of mundane separation & union .. Doesn't husbands go away like that? Doesn't wives wait for the return? Or even vice versa. It probably seems very routine to the eyes of many .. but the way you have captured the essence, is so heartwarming .. and vivid.

As always .. loved the detailing. Her sindoor on his shirt .. her promise to Yamuna to be back .. beautiful. 😊

And don't know why .. somewhere along the story, my eyes welled up .. probably it was just the way you made me feel for these two .. their love, their anguish, their journey .. .. like a river, a river that never gets lost.

I logged in looking for a break .. and you have transported me to some other world. With that .. I will leave for now. 😊

Added:

How they felt during their first (real) wedding .. I loved more what you have made Khushi feel. We have all read and write a lot on what really ASR was feeling but Khushi's .. I can hardly recall. You are mine .. ah .. it was for both all the way.

Thank you.

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indi52

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: jakhushi
This one was beautiful Di...poignant yet heartwarming... A tale shimmering with love. Absolutely loved their moments of tenderness before he went away, during his trip and on this return.
Such a beautiful rendition of union of 2 souls... albeit an unconventional ones... On a fateful windy night.

A perfect tale of two hearts...

khushi 🤗

hi, kotodin pore... i was so happy to see your like on one of my stories that i decided to pm you... thank you first of all for reading. and i like that "a tale shimmering with love." they had that shimmer thing in them, didn't they. oh i miss them. thanks for liking it so much. i hope all is well and i get to see more of you here and there... 😳