arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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IssK.

@IssK.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#621

BEAUTIFUL!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏 Loved every detail, every bit of it.

A break then, is a good thing perhaps...to "reclaim dynamism".

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#622

This was TOTALLY worth the wait.

What a beautiful chapter.

Amazingly written.

The emotions came out so well.

Loved how detailed everything was.

You took care of their body language, emotions and dialogues so well.

Chapter perh ker maza aya!

Edited by IronButterfly - 11 years ago

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#623

Originally posted by: wiwy
To indi in demand👏
And our man in command!
A toast!🥳
Yay!

Feeling all of this😊 😛 😉 😭 😃 😆 🤢 😳 😡 and more❤️🤗

a toast of serious scotch i hope. thanks, sir, for this pronto reading. hope the 😡🤢 were less than the other bits. the man is leaping around being shatir... at last i can breathe. 😆

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Newbiesoapfan

@Newbiesoapfan

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#624

Wonderful di... out of the world!! For a moment. I thought he had lost his memory... but seems all's well!!

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#625

Originally posted by: IssPKaur
BEAUTIFUL!!!! 👏 Loved every detail, every bit of it.

A break then, is a good thing perhaps...to "reclaim dynamism".

thank you, so much. i hope there was a part in it you wanted to loop. 😃. hope the dynamism was just what the evening/morning/afternoon needed to wake it right up. 2.30am... very sleepless in singapore.

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#626

Originally posted by: Newbiesoapfan
Wonderful di... out of the world!! For a moment. I thought he had lost his memory... but seems all's well!!

thanks so much, ash... that is the only concession i made, he was allowed to be sort of floaty for a bit... but only to remember the most wonderful things.

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Meera

@khushiforever

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#627

So glad u updated
Fantastic part

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#628

Originally posted by: IronButterfly
This was TOTALLY worth the wait.

What a beautiful chapter.
Amazingly written.

The emotions came out so well.
Loved how detailed everything was.
You took care of their body language, emotions and dialogues so well.

Chapter perh ker maza aya!

thank you thank you, iron butterfly.

your comment is lovely... nothing new. always thrilled to see you here. maza aa gaya? i am delighted., you know, if one can't give maza, what's the point, huh. not all the time one has this outcome... lovely you enjoyed.

hope not to update this late next time.