arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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wiwy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

Originally posted by: indi52

a toast of serious scotch i hope. thanks, sir, for this pronto reading. hope the 😡🤢 were less than the other bits. the man is leaping around being shatir... at last i can breathe. 😆

BTW, I commented before I received your PM !😛

And 😡 and🤢 is more than the other emotions!!!!!!!!!

😡 because that snakewa tried to kill him and🤢 because HE is alive and kissing!

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Finally our man is back...

loved reading their emotions...very well written...

Snakewa did this with our ASR... I so want him to die...

continue soon :D

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Originally posted by: gata
Awww ... ''tum theek ho '' ,yes he is back .waiting for the story to unfold

hi gata,

good to see you. he is definitely back... 😆

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Originally posted by: MyluvASR
awesome update

thanks so much, glad you enjoyed, 😳.

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cheesemad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#635

oh yes i forgot to mention tum theek ho in my comment above...loved it:)

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#636

Originally posted by: cheesemad
Finally our man is back...
loved reading their emotions...very well written...
Snakewa did this with our ASR... I so want him to die...
continue soon :D

hi komal...

😆

straight death? nahiii.. we must make him suffer, yes?

hope you had fun, thanks for liking and reading so promptly.

will continue very soon.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#637

Originally posted by: wiwy

BTW, I commented before I received your PM !😛
And 😡 and🤢 is more than the other emotions!!!!!!!!!
😡 because that snakewa tried to kill him and🤢 because HE is alive and kissing!

awww i marvel at our strength, our resilience... how do we even manage to write those scenes without passing out or dying along the way. every time i come to the point where he will do er something to her, i have to pause and calm my nerves first. 🤣 🤣 🤣

thanks so much for hitting the post te moment it came up. bahut gratefuliya... hum.

okay that snakewa... i think we need to do a maar diya jaaye ya chhor diya jaaye with him trussed up like cacophonix on a tree. occasional whipping. what.

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#638

WOW...Indi Di...I am so happy...I just loved this chapter...can't tell how much...he wake up...their moment of realization...so beautifully written...then tum thik ho...ufff...how I miss this line...and then Brazil team ki tarah...made me smile...everyone's happiness seeing him wake up...so Di & the Doc is in regular conversation...loved it...
So it OP who brought Khushi's purse to Delhi for Arnav...he deserves a thanks...
ASR's shaatir dimaag is already working...he realized its not an accident...wow...this is our ASR...
Loved the update a lot...thanks for the pm...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 12 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#639

Indi👏

Breathtaking ...apna dard bhool keh "Tum Theek ho" as always...He feels bad just by pushing her aside and had no clue what happened to him as his time has frozen in those moments...

Green saree and the entire team...What The...😆

New suspense ...Silence from a Doc..no good sign...Do whatever but LG supposed to get better now...for punching that scum bag😡

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 12 years ago