arshi ff: without you... thread #1, chapters 1-13 **completed**

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: incandescent

Yes. Sexy, hot. 😳
So much could have happened at the poolside...

He has to be here. After everything he went through in life, he finally found tranquility and happiness...It can't just end there. He is a fighter and a survivor.
Arnav is real to me and so is Khushi. Even the thought something so terrible happening to them is excruciating. This is just another phase, a terrible one.
They have a lifetime to spend together...DM didn't bring them together for nothing. The story can't just run its course...or even change its course.

yes, fari, real people.

even now, even as i look at 133 to 138 for another thread, strange ache in me, for these people... asr and the girl he looks at as though his heart is playing madness with him, khushi. what story ran its course... if it did would new fan fiction start every day even six months after the show is over? and no, this is the inexorable power of love... nothing can change its course. certainly not a bus which shouldn't be speeding down a narrow lane.

but i need to see exactly how asr and khushi will tackle this one. thanks for reading and coming on the trip.

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Putija

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Posted: 12 years ago

#272

anjali walked into chhotey's room. khushi was saying, "aapki aankhen, do you know why i love your eyes? because they remind me of chocolate."

Indi beautifully written and sentimental very touching love your style

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#273

chalhov,

thanks so much. i am a bit senti aren't i? but just love being it 😆. so sweet of you to like that cute line. khushi and food... maybe i should get in a psychiatrist.

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: riti4u
Indi Di..finally read last 2 chapters...beautifully written di...chapter 3- I love our ASR beating those goons...and loved how khushi heard him say shut up..so asrish.. and those stars on his icu bed..😊..loved how you are merging present with past flashbacks...chapter 4- loved the moment in start between khushi and arnav...and how khushi understood that man is tender and soft "only" for her... it was magical... and really liking the plot now..just cant wait to read more...now...so shyam is nt showin up... ? hmm interesting...

thanks, riti,

glad you are connecting and finding asr asrish. liked the stars and the morning love? i need to keep him intact... gah it's tough. so easy not to sense his nuance, push him too much this way or that. he is beautiful, isn't he. the strangest sweetest meanes hansomest boy... do they make them like that you think? can't wait... i wish the words would come faster, i too am getting a bit excited.

and madam, where's your update? 😳

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riti4u

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: indi52

thanks, riti,

glad you are connecting and finding asr asrish. liked the stars and the morning love? i need to keep him intact... gah it's tough. so easy not to sense his nuance, push him too much this way or that. he is beautiful, isn't he. the strangest sweetest meanes hansomest boy... do they make them like that you think? can't wait... i wish the words would come faster, i too am getting a bit excited.

and madam, where's your update? 😳

ASR in your words is truely magical.. I will be updating soon Di...hopefully tonite😊

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BarunDiwani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Originally posted by: indi52

thank you... baby 😆. so glad you could sit through the morning scene... uh huh, don't blame the writing you naughty girl.

but really, it's so easy to slip into just sex when writing about the two... it's hard to find the heart of it... once you do, i guess it stops being embarrassing and starts becoming love... life.

so you like the doc... well, he is a grown man, he can possibly tell by looking at a woman whether she's been with a guy or not and also, with women anjali's age, it's quite normal to think they're married, especially in our land... so i guess that's why he wonders about her husband.

yes, there was nancy... wonder where she's now.

wonder why i give such a faraq about all these characters who don't exist.

writing okay, my poet? not too much of a drag?

lol, Indi's writing is doing wonders, its corrupting our achhi bacchi Durgey!!!🤣 Major hats off Indi!!! Maybe you should add this one to the latest news update 😉

Edited by BarunDiwani - 12 years ago

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

^^^ ha ha ami, and what if i want to write for the already corrupted ones. hmmm socheka padi. now durga will disown me.

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Dreamcatcher

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

Read chapter 3 and 4... beautifully written!

So story is narrated in three time zones... past, starting when Arnav and Khushi first met... immediate past, Arnav's accident... and present, Aranv in coma!

I like the structure of the story and am enjoying reading it. Thanks for the PM!

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indi52

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Posted: 12 years ago

#279

^^^ hi reenu,
thank you so much for that lovely comment. yeah till now three time zones. i am enjoying flitting between them trying to catch the story. hopefully i'll get there. see you soon.