OS Series- Vignettes - Part 8. This day, that year

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mastermagician

@mastermagician

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Posted: 12 years ago

#41

u have done great justice to da story. hats off to u👏 my heart really ached for kushi...

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#42

this brought tears to my eyes...first because it was so well written... and secondly because u were able to document the pain soo well!!

hats off to u dear...this was really heart-touching! :)

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#43

Appurs;

Thank-you.

Thank-you for being so sensitive where an emotional subject like this is concerned. There is not a single soul in the world who has not been touched by death. Our lives are limited. That is the way of life. You have taken a very heavy subject and written about it in a most beautiful manner.

Thank-you for showing us the feelings of Kushi (the way she was treated in the show, where her feelings and past were ignored was abominable!) Thank-you for showing us a caring and concerned Arnav (the way he should have been and the one we fell in love with in the show, not the cad they showed us that treated Kushi as an irritation and servant and not a wife.)

Thank-you, Appurs.

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garash

@garash

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#44

loved it. pls do continue.

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montykothapalli

@montykothapalli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#45

As always u touched my heart!!

thank you!!

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#46

Hey.. I loved this series of yours but this one literally made my cry.. I can very well understand whats the pain of loosing someone and its just not the barsi day, everytime you remember them, eyes are always welled up unknowingly 😊 Anyways, loved the way you wrote this part... hats off to you for pulling this one with so much of pain & emotions!

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#47

This was a wonderful piece of writing. And I have to confess after reading it once I went back to read it again and again and still didn't get enough of it. I wished they had shown this exactly in the show, it would have been wonderful.

The way u write I loved to read and therefore as this is the eight part I want u please to pm me the links to the other parts, so I can also read them.

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abavi

@abavi

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Appurs

Thank you...can I take the typos as a compliment? Were so you moved?

I have been in that place before...when I lost my grandparents and my fiance...

All I can say is that experience makes you a better writer...you've been there, felt that...so you can write about it realistically...

I am sorry about your loss- and true - when we write from our own experience- it takes everything to a completely different level- The guilt that you could have changed the destiny of your lost one if you had done something about it is so much a realistic feeling... But destiny is destiny - if it has to happen it will happen right?

But still you are an excellent writer- I have read so many good stuff here at the forum, But people normally have a style that they follow- most of them dont tend to step out of their comfort zone- But you are one of the very few writers for whom different styles come out pretty well.

yeah it is..😆 I was so engrossed in your story that I didnt see the time and then I had to run to catch the bus home and was in a hurry when I typed that reply...

By the way I have corrected the typos😛

Edited by abavi - 12 years ago