OS Series- Vignettes - Part 8. This day, that year

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laddoo598

@laddoo598

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Wow. That was quite something.

Can I say how much I love the fact that you dig deeper into the psych of these characters, for example, from watching the show, it was quite apparent that Khushi is somewhat of an escapist, she has a tendency to shove the unpleasant things in life at the back of her mind and not confront them head on, at least not until she had someone who would understand her pain, who has been through the same thing, who knows how it feels to lose your parents. This OS does just that. It was very hard hitting. As I always say, you weave magic with your words, you manage to inject so much emotion into your writing, it leaves me awed! :)

P.S Khushi had a goat named Laddoo. TeeHee! ;)

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AparnaRenu

@AparnaRenu

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: laddoo598
Wow. That was quite something.

Can I say how much I love the fact that you dig deeper into the psych of these characters, for example, from watching the show, it was quite apparent that Khushi is somewhat of an escapist, she has a tendency to shove the unpleasant things in life at the back of her mind and not confront them head on, at least not until she had someone who would understand her pain, who has been through the same thing, who knows how it feels to lose your parents. This OS does just that. It was very hard hitting. As I always say, you weave magic with your words, you manage to inject so much emotion into your writing, it leaves me awed! :)

P.S Khushi had a goat named Laddoo. TeeHee! ;)

Thank you...i was wondering when I would get your review 😊

You know what, I've spent a year obsessing over these characters...I mean literally dreaming about them...but they've become a part of me ever since I started working on these OSs...I can feel them think and speak...might be just losing my marbles, but definitely helps with the writing!😆

And I did think of you when I wrote about the goat! I just couldn't see a goat named Jalebi...was wondering if you'd claim IP rights!

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samba12

@samba12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Thank you for this special vignette about Khushi's loss.

It was never developed in the original serial and few writers have attempted to write about it.

This was done very sensitively underlining the tender understanding between Arnav and Khushi.

Oh yes they are so different, but in this, their recognition of each other's emotional needs, you have done justice to them.

Thanks again for this lovely update. I do enjoy your light-hearted ones, but its pieces like this one that help me appreciate the nature of the relationship between Arnav and Khushi.

Lookng forward to future vignettes - whether light-hearted, poignant or even mundane.

Wishing you a peaceful and productive New Year,

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love_for_serial

@love_for_serial

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Very emotional OS!

I always wanted to see this on screen but...

You did an amazing job in writing their emotions.

Keep writing the wonderful stories!

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ArnieBoyBarun

@ArnieBoyBarun

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

excellent, i totally loved it. Having lost my mother, i could very well relate to khushi and you have beautifully written her part and past. Wonderful.