OS Series- Vignettes - Part 8. This day, that year

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

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+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

👏 you handled this chapter beautifully! I have always wanted the show to address this issue and today you made it into a reality. I can only imagine how difficult it was to write, because reading it was extremely hard! I cried with Khushi, for Khushi. And for once Arnav did everything just right.

Thank you for this. It truly was needed.

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Deeksha

@-Dee-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

That's a bond I adore. Lovely 😊

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abby2181

@abby2181

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

You did a fabulous job of describing Khushi's grief.

As usual I loved this OS too.

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

such a poignant account of khushi's past!!!!!!! u captured it so beautifully... awsome n loved it to the T!!!!!!!

must hv been very painful n draining experience for u to write this!!!!!!!

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Amanda Lim

@Amanda.Lim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Awesome OS..

Thanks for the English translation... :D

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Awesome

You have penned this OS so welll

hats off to you

Thx for the PM

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sonal

@srain10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

very emotional os😭 wished their had shown this in show khushi's pain, and arhi's bonding and love

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Angels11

@Angels11

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Sorry but i dint enjoy this OS coz most of it is in Hindi. I prefer 2 read stories which r in English though i am v fluent in Hindi. Just a request frm me. Of course its ur wish wat lang u post in but it ll b better 4 readers like me if u post in english.

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kirti98

@kirti98

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Ur writing is awsom. Always look forward for more. Keep writing dear. 😛

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

This was beautiful!! You have touched my heart with this piece of writing!

Oh how I wish the writers of the show had shown something like this. They skipped many important things like this which would have been a great closure to some of the loops they opened early in the show...things that made me connect with the show in the first 6 months.

You described Arnav's emotions perfectly. Instead of going the cliched way, you actually made it seem very real when you made Arnav apprehensive and clueless as to how to handle his wife. But he was clear in one thing...that he will be there for her...even if he does not know exactly what to do to ease her pain. This is very much like how most men operate. They are usually clueless as to what to say or do that will make the woman feel better. But they stick to the woman and follow her around diligently when they see her in pain.

Loved how Khushi finally found a release for her pain that she had bottled up all these years. True soulmates!