OS: Bewafa Part 4 UPD! pg8

The one shot basically is from the past...who can ever forget how arnav ws kidnapped...that was the bestest track;-)
so...before starting it...lets make a mind set...the os starts from where arnav is about to leave for his flight(bfore the kidnap)...and khushi is trying to stop him
"Arnavji plz...plz wait for some more time..he wil be coming...plz...bs thori der aur...plz..."
"Khushi plz...it wont work...i need to go..."
Gal sun meri tu mutyare
Ki samjhe apne ap nu?
Mere majar t u ki ki kardi
Aye gal bas tu hi janti

Voice over"Mr.Arnav Singh Raizada...the flight is about to depart within 15mins...plz occupy your seat..."
"I know you can never prove this to me...i need to go..my flight is about to depart.."
"Arnavji..."
Menu safaiyan pesh na kr
Rab kolon thora jya dar

Khushi held his hand. Arnav turned and looked back at her..she had tears in her eyes...those beautiful and hypnotizing eyes of her...that could captivate anyone.."how can anyone look so innocent,yet so wicked from heart.."he thought
As soon as he thought so...he remembered the incident...that incident which shattered his heart...thaat once again broke his trust in love...the day when he wanted to confess his true feelings towards her..
Sikh ja ke pyar karne da val
Jhoote sang sade ik ik pak
and what did he see?
Bewafa bewafa
Bewafa nikli h tu
Jhoota pyar jhoota pyar
Jhoota pyar kita hai tu

<font color="#0000ff">FLASHBACK</font>
"Khushi ji...you have become my everything...my love...my obsession..my craziness"he..that pervert said so hugging her...
"If that is the case shyam ji..then why dont you leave anjali j?"she replied...getting rid of his hold
<font color="#0000ff">FLASHBACK ENDS</font>
He came back to his senses when he heard the voice over again...
He looked with extreme anger and hatred towards khushi...venom pouring from his eyes for the girl who tried to destroy his di's life...his d...
He pushed her a bit back and freed his hand from hers...He left without giving back a single glance..
Menu kuch kehndi na hun lor
Mera dil torke tu na hun tour
Pyar tera chaid na hor
Sade pyar di nishani aj tu mor\

She followed behind screaming...weeping...shattered..
"Arnavji...plz listen to me arnavji...plz."
"plz dont leave me like that..."
"trust me arnavji...i dint do anything wrong..."
Bewafa bewafa
Bewafa nikli h tu
Jhoota pyar jhoota pyar
Jhoot pyar kita h tu

He settled in the flight..looked out to only c the world below growin smallhe looked down to see the black diary on which was engraved

😒Guyz after working very hard...i have been able to write this os...i dont know if it is worth reading or not...but yeah...i will get to know of ths through your comments only..i have thought of a few more parts to this...if you guyz would like it...only then wil i post them...so plz..rply...i wil b waiting
ps:guyz i am new to this forum and dont really know that wel of how it works...only if u guyz help me out wid this...
cmon guyz...be a bit of generous...there are more than a hundred views and no comments.. if it isnt that gud...do tel me atleast...so that i can improve myself

Loved it.Continue soon

wait what happens next then and you wont find any proofs against her but against shyam and how you have been duped by that good for nothing man if only you had listened completely but of course you didnt and it could mean the end of everything for you so here he leaves her to go to london does he not get kidnappedhope you do continue it sooon plspretty pls
Hey that was so nice of you to comment...no no...he wont be kidnapped here..
sory dear...i cant pm you cuz being a newbie...for that...i'l have to wait for 6 more days...and i dont want you to wait..so i'l surely update tomorrow..so u can c it tomorrow

Hey nice start.. do continue...

CHAPTER 2
Part(A)
HIDDEN SECRETS
He flipped some pages of the diary and read
"This month is going to be very bad...look na...pehle wo sheesh mahal ka wakia...aur humari di ka rishta..wo b humari...aur us laad governor ki waja se tootna...aur ab..my bauji's shops demolishment...life is turning hell!"
He flipped some more pages...
"Finally things are settling here in Delhi!Shyam ji is so nice..so cooperating..such a nice person...knw what?he got me a job...now i will be able to get my family out of financial crisis"
He thought to himself"So the love story of shyam and that home wrecker begins"..he turne the nxt page
""What the!"he does not know any othe word than this...shyam ji ne hume kis musibat me dal diya?i thought he was helping me..but look"
"Laad governor pushed me from the second floor oe the office!koi aise a krta h kya?God knws wat that ASR is made of!"
"Laad governor is very odd..first made me stand in heavy rain at the parking lot...and then saved from an accident..wel whatever...i hate him..and thats final"
"His fmily s so nice...then how come he?Mental case..that laad governor"
"Lavanya ji is so nice...and know what?i am training hfr to be laad governor wife...pta nai kya banega un ka?"
"Aj humari lottery laggi...hum buht khush hain"
"Buaji b na...i dont knw why she wants me to wed shyam ji...but i cant..i only take him as a friend..."
"Aj diwali ti...aur hamari zindgi ka sb se manhus din..i was very happy since morning...i also made rangoli..then i had to go to shantiwan and...
WIL POST THE REMAINING PART AFTER FEW HOURS...I AM GOING FOR LUNCH;-)

"I dont know why...but that laad governor was continuosly staring at me...he was behaving so differently...i was feeling very odd under his gaze...and then later...at the poolside..he returned me my payal...the one i had been madly searching for...infact he made me wear it! Then...i really dont know his intention...but i felt as if he was about to kiss me...it was the right momen when his phone started ringing..or else dont knw what might have had happened...i really felt wierd...i really did...oh God!that was a different sensation...well forget it...wo laad governor der bad hi apni ai pe a gaya...he went inside and announced hs and lavanya ji's marriage...aur us se b bura pta h kya hua?i was forced to get engaged to shyam ji..for the sake of bauji"
"i thought they didnt need me anymore..since my job was over...but they all stopped me..and that too with their notanki...buht acche hain wo sb...sawae laad governor k"
"hume shyam ji pe...dont know why...pr ek dum se shak hone laga h"
"un k mobile pe "RANI SAHIBA" likha tha...and thats exactly ho di's husband calls her!"
"Today was a puja at shantivan...and today...i came to know of a bitter reality...shyam ji is already married...and that too...with di!How can anyone be so heartless and selfish...wo admi dhong racha raha tha...and di...i felt pity for her...she had since long been fasting for him...for the sake of his long life...how could he be so cruel...a hypocrite! This fact was undigestible...i immediately broke the engagement..but yeah...i wont tell anyone about it...for the sake of the trust they all have in him...di would be shattered..and i cant see her like that..."

"matlab khushi ko kuch pata nahi ta shyam ki pehl shadi k bare me?means that she was telling the truth..!" he thought to himself
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People..thats it for today! how did you find it?
guyz plz...i would appreciate if you people tell me if i need to modify my writing style or not...and yeah...constructive criticism is also welcome...
And yeah...one more thing...guys i really wanted to reply to your comments yesterday...i even tried...i know it would sound stupid...but i dont know the way to it...(u people must have seen the blooper i made on page 1)so plz...let me knw the method of doing...it...BUDDY ME FOR MY MORE WORKS

Love,
Ayesha

IMP NOTE:
people..due to some personal probs...the nxt chap wil b updated on thursday only...hope u al undrstand