OS: Bewafa Part 4 UPD! pg8

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

just great now you know that she had nothing to do with shyam
its all your fault that she met with him
aur kahiye that you write your own destiny
yeah right if you did this wouldnt have happened with you your sister and certainly not khushi
idiot he better find out the full truth and soon
bewafaa toh woh kabhi naa thi parr aap ka humein nahin pata
pls do continue this further

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tvbuf

@tvbuf

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Aweseome.

Pls PM when you update

Can you give the link to prt 1 ?

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

yes you idiot she didnt know anything about shyam
not only was that man playing with your sister but also khushi
but then when did you take time to know about this all
gosh what do we do with this jerk man
dear you are going just well
and there was a blooper well i didnt get it oh well just continue
see ya soon
merry xmas

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Amanda Lim

@Amanda.Lim

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Finally, Arnav finally know about Khushi.. :D

PM me when you continue too..

Thanks ..

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deathryder

@deathryder

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: chavvi16
yes you idiot she didnt know anything about shyam
not only was that man playing with your sister but also khushi
but then when did you take time to know about this all
gosh what do we do with this jerk man
dear you are going just well
and there was a blooper well i didnt get it oh well just continue
see ya soon
merry xmas

Hey, there wasn't any blooper in chap1...read the last comment on pg1 and you'll find it
Thnx..happy that u found it nice...wil post the nxt chap tomorrow surely

Edited by deathryder - 12 years ago

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deathryder

@deathryder

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Amanda.Lim
Finally, Arnav finally know about Khushi.. :D
PM me when you continue too..
Thanks ..

Thnx dear,will give the next update tomorrow surely

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deathryder

@deathryder

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: BigIPKKNDFan
Aweseome.

Pls PM when you update

Can you give the link to prt 1 ?

Aww..thnx dear..happy that u liked it
chap 1 is on pg 1 only

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shutter

@shutter

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

This is a great os!!!!!! we r gonna see the kidnapping fiasco from a new perspective...😉

waiting for thursday to come soon... pm me wenevr u update plz...

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deathryder

@deathryder

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: shutter
This is a great os!!!!!! we r gonna see the kidnapping fiasco from a new perspective...😉
waiting for thursday to come soon... pm me wenevr u update plz...

Thnx for liking it dear...wel its an OS...and if i bring in the kidnapping track..it wont remain one..there isn't any kidnapping track though...
thnx for liking it.. thursday is tomorrow only..we can wait that much...cant we?