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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 3

REALIZATION

"Oh come on ASR, you can't be that big a fool. They must have patched up later, that's why she was hugging him, and she even told Shyam to leave Di". As soon as this thought crept up his mind, he immediately shut the diary.

DELHI, SHANTIVAN:

"Anjali bitya, call the doctor. Look na, khushi bitiya bukhar me tap rai hain". Nani called out to anjali

"ji nani, I'll go just now," Anjali replied, equally worried for her bhabhi.

"See, I told chotte to take khushi bitya with him..but he doesn't listen to anyone!" nani said while stroking Khushi's hair.

IN FLIGHT:

Something pricked his heart. He remembered something

"Trust me arnavji, I didn't do anything"

"Arnav ji, plz listen to me, plz"

"Please don't leave me like that"

She followed behind, screaming, weeping, shattered.

She had tears in her eyes; those beautiful and hypnotizing eyes of her, that could captivate anyone.

"No, I must read it, I need to know what was her intention," he thought.

He flipped the pages to the date when payash..infact they too got married

"Today was the worst day of my life. My trust on love has broken..I am left shattered..broken…I don't want this life…I really don't….I never thought that my happiness would come to an end like this…I never knew my life would turn into a damned hell… I never knew

Today was di's marriage.. I was very happy, very excited, very much, and most of all, a had realized I was in love…with Arnavji…I was getting ready for the event when I found a note

"Mujh se chatt par a kar milo"

I thought it was Arnav ji. I went upstairs excitedly. But what I saw, left me shocked. It wasn't Arnavji, it was Shyam Manohar Jha! And know what he told me?

"Khushi ji… you have become my everything…my love..my obsession..my everything!"

And then he hugged me…forcibly

I felt pity… I felt pity on myself.. I felt pity on Di…how could someone do something so horrible to di how could he? She loved him so much! She sacrificed her own being for him…and what was he doing to her? Cheating her? He was nothing more than a serpant's toothed, who was biting di..every day, and every night! I immediately told him to leave Di…because a PERVERT like him didn't deserve di's love…di's care…and most importantly; di herself!

I left from there…giving him a tight slap on his face. That was enough of him. I thought of telling about everything to Arnav ji. But only a few minutes later, I realized I could not do much about it! Because di was pregnant, with shyam ji's child! I decided to maintain silence. That's all I could do…that's all!

And then came the BIGGEST disaster of my life…

Arnav ji dragged me to a corner. I don't know what happened to him all of a sudden? He was all good yesterday. And today he told me to marry him, for SIX months, for the sake of payash!

Was that all I meant to him? Was it.. I thought he loved me…no, he couldn't…a stone hearted person like him can never love…can never love anyone

I don't know the reason of the treatment I am being subjected to… I don't

I asked him…but he didn't reply

I had no choice..and know what is the result to all this? I have no answers to the questions of my family…they think bad about me…first time…first time in my life…amma slapped me…they told me that I don't belong to them…I am no one to them!

He threw me out of his room…shut the poolside door on my face…told me I had no place in his heart…and that he hates me

Maybe that's what I deserve…maybe"

So ppl, only one part left to this… how was it… yeah yeah… bash arnav as much as possible! Drop in your comments… and han, don't forget to like

Note: I will post the longest, and the last part to this OS on 30thDecember…Sunday!

Love,

Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Nice pls update soon, and pls pls pls include a major redemption track😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
oh no he didnt just think that did he
oh that idiot what has he gone and done
and now all he is left with is guilt and nothing but that
finally that jerk knows the full truth which he didnt hear on payash wedding
in turn ruining the life of an innocent girl who loved him
and it seems that the girl in question has high fever because you left her like that and didnt listen to her
hope its not too late for you
you have single handely ruined her dreams her life and the love she had for you anie well done
you did prove to her that dreams really shouldnt be seen
cheers for pm
am looking forward to the final bit

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Unres...

first f all.. thnx a lot 4 d pm ayesha!!!!!!!! dat thick skulled jerk who calls himselr d writer f his own destiny didnt even hv d sense to find out what the truth b4 doin such a thing!!!!!!!
n poor khushi must b sick thinking about wat happened at the airport!!!!!!
Awsome os!!!!!!! loving it!!!!

bt dear 30th is very faaarrr...😭😭 hw m i spsd to wait for the last part f a beautiful os tl den??
nvr mnd... njyy n happy new yr in adv.!!!!!!! 👏 👏 😊 😊 😊 😊 😃 😃
Edited by shutter - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: deathryder


Thnx for liking it dear...wel its an OS...and if i bring in the kidnapping track..it wont remain one..there isn't any kidnapping track though...
thnx for liking it.. thursday is tomorrow only..we can wait that much...cant we?


ohh i ddnt realise dat thursday was so near in my excitement!!!!! 😳
n yeah of course it cnt b havn d kidnapping track!!!!!! 😲 my bad!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
I read all the parts at once. Awesome SS. But u can't be serious about ending it in just one more part right? U have to include his realization, redemption, wooing Khushi back and Shyam's revelation. U just can't leave it here. U r not allowed. U must continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
really nicce os dear. do pm me?
deathryder thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: risat

I read all the parts at once. Awesome SS. But u can't be serious about ending it in just one more part right? U have to include his realization, redemption, wooing Khushi back and Shyam's revelation. U just can't leave it here. U r not allowed. U must continue


Hey, that isn't fair han? i understand your sentiments..but dear,my holidays are ending this sunday..i mean then i won't be able to give updates that frequently...and i don't like people waiting too long...try n understand
wel thnx for liking it
deathryder thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: shutter

Unres...


first f all.. thnx a lot 4 d pm ayesha!!!!!!!! dat thick skulled jerk who calls himselr d writer f his own destiny didnt even hv d sense to find out what the truth b4 doin such a thing!!!!!!!
n poor khushi must b sick thinking about wat happened at the airport!!!!!!
Awsome os!!!!!!! loving it!!!!

bt dear 30th is very faaarrr...😭😭hw m i spsd to wait for the last part f a beautiful os tl den??
nvr mnd... njyy n happy new yr in adv.!!!!!!!😃


Aww...that was so sweet of you...happy that u liked it
Same to you dear
Edited by deathryder - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: chavvi16

<font color="#0000FF" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">oh no he didnt just think that did he
oh that idiot what has he gone and done
and now all he is left with is guilt and nothing but that
finally that jerk knows the full truth which he didnt hear on payash wedding
in turn ruining the life of an innocent girl who loved him
and it seems that the girl in question has high fever because you left her like that and didnt listen to her
hope its not too late for you
you have single handely ruined her dreams her life and the love she had for you anie well done
you did prove to her that dreams really shouldnt be seen
cheers for pm
am looking forward to the final bit</font>


Thnx for liking it...to be honest, you would find a really nice khushi here...the reason i'll write in next post

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