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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: ruby-red

hey this is brilliant.
please continue, but make arnav regret his actions, make him come back and appologise to khushi.
please add me to your pm list.


Thnx dear..glad that you liked it
wait for the nxt part...i hope u like that...Will pm u for sure
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
Awesome part.
loved it.
cheers for the PM.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: allegro

Awesome part.

loved it.
cheers for the PM.😃


Mar don mje tane yar...pehli bar pm jo kia h;-)
wel..am glad that you liked it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Finally, the truth is staring him at his face..
Hopefully he realize that Khushi is innocent.. :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45

CHAPTER 4(a)

TERA MERA RISHTA

Realization dawned upon him…he couldnt believe what he read…khushi…a poor soul..he had hurt her like hell!

Tera yakeen kyun

Main ne kiya nahi

Tujhse raha kyun juda

" Why? Why didn't I…I loved her…and look what I have done to her!" he mentally cursed himself. That was just too mich from his side…he was confused..bewildered.. shattered…Even enemies don't do this to one another…what he did to her..he gave her so much pain..and she bared it..she cried day and night to know what was her fault…why was she treated so brutally…why did she get only pain and unbearable bruise on her heart from him?...why? And he never bothered to reply to her….and the day she tried to prove her innocence….she didn't get a chance….was this his love which he wanted to confess to her on the day they wedded?...love without trust?..no…a person in love can never do as such a thing to his love…he can't…he never can' he mentally declared himself to be guilty…what else could he do?

There was a temporary stay at Dubai…for few minutes..from where he had to move on to London… he dragged his trolley towards the air plane…towards his next destination

Mujh pe ye zindagi

Karti rahi sitam

Tune hi di hai panah

FLASHBACK:

"kya wo humein dekh rahe hain?" he said, looking thoughtfully at the stars. "kya wo humein dekh kr khush hain khushi?"

"han!"

FLASHBACK ENDS

Tera mera rishta puraana

FLASHBACK:

(Teri meri sequel)

He rolled her in his arms….danced with her like a couple…and then dipped her…

FLASHBACK ENDS

Hai kya tarap

Hai ye kaisi saza

Tu kyun muje aj

Yaad aa gaya

FLASHBACK:

-"tumhe mujhse shadi krna hogi…wo bhi sirf che(6) mah k liye"

"If you won't do this…I won't let the marriage of payash to happen"

- He dragged her up the stairs of the temple..brutally…hurting her wrists badly…but maybe she was too weak to even complain…he tied the mangalsutra around her nck uninterestedly…applied sindoor in her mang…tears of defeat rolled down her eyes…her eyes!!!!

- "Aj se tum meri patni ho!"

- garima slapped on her face…tears continuously rolled down her eyes…. "Why khushi why?" but she had no reply…cause even she didn't know why? FB ends.

Bechain din mere

Bechain raat hai

Kya me karun kuch bata

FLASHBACK:

"why..?why did you this to me???answer me Mr. Raizada!!!answer me!!!"

"get out of my room!", he replied to her,held her hand and dragged her to the poolside….opened the door and thre her out there "you will sleep over there from now onn"..and shut the door on her face..

"cause I hate you khushi..i hate you!!!"

Hain mere paun hi

Khud meri beriyan

Mujh se mujhe tu churra

She was shivering with cold…but he remained unaffected…he felt pain for her…but didn't do much…his pain never allowed him to do so…he didn't sleep the entire night…but it didn't matter to him"

FLASHBACK ENDS

"I WILL CORRECT EVERY MISTAKE OF MINE", he had decided!!

-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SHANTIVAN:

"Chotte tumhari tou flight thi na? Then how come you are back here?"anjali asked…confused on the sudden arrival of arnav

"Han di..wo mene cancel kr di…I'll take the meeting on a conference call…you don't need to worry about it", he replied in a hurry

"challo phir betho…I will ask HP to get you some coffee"

"nah..di I don't need it..where is khushi?"

"Oh! I see..my chotte can not stay away from his wife eh?"

"Di plzzz..not now!"

"okey baba.. Well she is in her room..sleeping"

"Why? I mean is she ok?"he asked..worried

"She is suffering from high fever chotte…since the time she came back from the airport…she just fainted an hour back and…"

"Did you call the doc di?"

"han chotte..she is fine now..go see her"

"Yeah di"

He quickly climbed the stairs…he was desperate…desperate to see his love..his wife

ARSHI room:

He sat beside her…she was saying something "Arnavji..plz listen to me arnavji…I didn't do anything wrong"

Jo mujh me hai

Shaks wo keh raha

Aa ab mein dun

Karz tera chukka

He held her hand softly...bent down and kissed her on her forehead…mumbled "khushi"

She slowly opened her eyes to see arnav sitting beside her

"Arnavji.."

"shh..khushi"he pressed his finger against her lips "you take some rest..we will talk later"he said out of care

He tried to get up…only to be held by her again..she entwined her fingers with his..and urged him to sit beside her

"Arnavji…plz listen to me"

He sat beside her and while stroking her hair, replied ,"you don't need to say anything khushi…I know it"

Ankhein hain num meri

Saansein chubhan meri

Zakhm hua phir hara

His eyes welled up with tears

"I am sorry khushi..i am sorry for givain you so much pain..i am sorry for whatever wrong I did to you!". Tears now rolled down his eyes. He continued, "I know that I don't deserve your forgiveness khushi..but khushi.. I will do everything I can to get you back…"

Dil ke veerane me

Mere fasane mein

Tu hi tou har dam raha

"You don't need o be sorry arnavji…you believed in what you were told…and everyone commits mistakes..its natural, it doesn't really matter what you did to me, aas long as you promise to stay by my side..always"

"Khushi! How can you be so forgiving? How can you forget whatever wrong I did to you? I don't deserve your forgiveness khushi, I just don't. tell me khushi, tell me. Why do you want to forgive me when all I have given you is pain. A horrible treatment, called you names, a home wrecker, a gold digger, and…"

She shushed him by placing her finger on his lips

"Because I love you arnavji", she replied and continued. "I love you arnav ji! Do you…"

"Yes khushi! I love you too.. il loved you since the first time that I saw you..its just that I realized it a bit too late! I would have realized it earlier..but my danm stupid ego didn't let me… I love you Khushi..and I promise… from now onn, I wont let a single tear to roll down from your eyes! I promise!"

Tears of happiness rolled down her eyes

"Come on now khushi! Abi abi tou wada kia hai… abi hi turwao gi kya?" They both burst into laughter

Tera mera rishta purana

"It is said that love happens in the very first site! You just need to realize it!"

so people! That was the end to my first one shot on ipk forum "bewafa!" that later changed into "wafadar!" LOL! How was it? Let me know of your opinion about it..drop in your comments..and yeah, don't forget to like!

People! I am thinking of starting a new FF..do let me know if I should write it or not! It will basically be about arshi in college…the concept would me mine all over…nothing from the serial itself!

BUDDY ME FOR RECEIVING ITS PROLOGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!

Love,

Ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Note: people, most of you would be having the complain that why did khushi forgive arnav so quickly. The simple answer to it is this that if you guys remember the airport scene, we had seen khushi head bent over heals to convince arnav regarding her innocence…think from the perspective, if arnav had believed in her, would there have been the "KHUSHI'S NARAZGI" fiasco and all? I don't think so. The same has happened in here…do think over it, and yeah, let me know through comments

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Don't end it so fast..
Why don't you make it into an SS??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Hey I loved it !! It was a really awesome SS !
I needed ur permission ! I want to contunie this SS from where u left ! I'll give the link of this story ! I'll give u credits ! It will even have ur name before the part start !!

Plz tell me about it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
huh!!!!!!!! finally all misunderstandings cleared!!!!!!!!! khushi will forgive him easily bcz she loves him unconditionally n irrevocably!!!!!!! glad arnav realised his mistake!!!!!!!!! loved dis os!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
yeah you are right she would have forgiven her easily unfortunately
well of course she would she is khushi after all
had it been you and me we would never have forgiven that man
i mean who can right
now he realises what he did was wrong took him long enough didnt it
well that sure was emotional right
if you wanna do another story go for it we will try our best to support you
cheers for pm

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