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ArhiIPKKND

@ArhiIPKKND

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

that was interesting...just dont understand where dadi gets all this newfound love for her damadji!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Priya_990

@Priya_990

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Very beautifully written.proud to say tat ur my favourite writer on IF.

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AR_EternalLove

@AR_EternalLove

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

it was soo beautiful...

i hope this happened in our show too

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.Jazz.

@.Jazz.

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Now, when will this happen in the show?? Seriously, i am sick of Dadiji and her damadji ko wapas bulao pleas😳

I loved the simple way in which you potrayed ArHi's love soo beautifully <3

Loved it Sankadevi 🤗

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809768

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Shyam is such a creep!
But a fiesty Khushi, determined to not keep quiet and let him get away this time- is such a nice thing to read! :D

I lovve this possesive avatar of Arnav- who'll never let anyone hurt his wife, or blame her for no fault of hers: saving her from the evil cluthes of this world! xD

Dadi, will never learn, will she?
But i liked the way- a doubt had been instilled in her mind! :)

That last part- wherein he apologises was fabulous!
And the last line, being the best of this story!

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Risha, what a beautiful story.

Khushi you stood up for yourself at last...atta girl!

And Arnav, you proved once again why you are a hero despite all the vices.

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

wow risha, beautiful one

Perfect name to a perfect story

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Why did u stop ur arnav at one punch!? The cvs r..hopeless! Bt u r our saviour..so we xpct more punches!
Lovely use of words, n awsum description..superlike!

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.ProperPatola

@.ProperPatola

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

this was amazing! beautifully written!👏😊

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Sruthi

@-Sruthi-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

👏 Amazing OS.. Y can't CVs show something like this in the show?? Can't understand y the people in RM r so blind..🤢

Loved the way Khushi reacted to Snakewa's moves.. You should have made Arnav give a few more punches to that gadha..😉 Show mein tho yeh nahi honewala hai.. 😛

Have always been an admirer of ur writing style.. This one is no exception.. Beautifully written..😊

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