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Posted: 13 years ago
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I AM FIRST!!🥳

First if all beautifully written Rish.I loved the way you have played with words here and i must say your vocabulary is Waah-worthy! :)

This is what everybody wanted to happen in the show ofcourse and since the CV's have pissed us of you have come as an Angel :) Now i get what you mean by hands. Apt title. If only Arnav would just punch Shyam till he bleeds like your Arnav Did right here. TRP's would rocket upwards.

But now i guess you are gna enjoy high TRP's in form of likes and comments :)

You have inspired*not in the bad way😆*me to write!

I am rambling now..:/

Great one!


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Posted: 13 years ago
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EEEKKK!!! First thing first: I am on the 1st pg of your OS! Yayy!! :-D:-D
secondly, Can I say I LOVE YOU for writing this! It was PERFECT. Exactly what I would have loved to see on the show, exactly what would have raised the shows trp. But alas , the creatives cant ever be as brilliant as you.
Keep writing girl, Always. 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Great...i wish dey'l show it in d show...realy amazing...dadi and her damadji..grrr...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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BEAUTIFUL!!!! Kaash aisa tv pe bhi dikhate...😕
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I never knew that I was so bloodthirsty till I read your story.

Why did you make Arnav stop with one punch? After sitting through an entire episode of Shyamu in fancy dress, Garima having a heart attack, and Dadi playing the joker on us, we deserve some light relief.

Nice read!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome Rish!
Don't mind if I kill Shyam, Anjali & deadly. Three idiots! 😡
And shyam was staring at khushi like that? Ewww!Disgusting! I feel like killing him then & there.

Whoa! Did khushi slap him? Good! Very good. I want her to fry him like a jalebi in hot oil. 😆
But it was really nice to see khushi standing up for herself. Why don't they show such things on the show?

Loved Arnav in this one. Glad that he punched shyam. Please ask him to hit him with Dandas too.
In your face deadly, go & live with your precious Damadji & Anjali bitiya, we don't need you.

The last part was beautiful. And the ending was Perfect!

Keep writing 🤗

P.S.- Sorry for the stupid rant but shyam's name is enough to drive me insane 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovel 1 :) you have made a habit of beautiful stories
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Posted: 13 years ago
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V v beautiful. Those 2 vile creatures must be thrown out of the RM. with immediate effect
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os
y cv's r not showing something like this

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