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@mistyrains

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

That was terrific Risha. I flinched when Shyam held Khushi's wrist. And I admire her strength to have let it all out. There was a brimming intensity throughout the OS, and when he said sorry, I think I cried a bit. Moving, very thoroughly engaging OS.

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ArshiRaiguptha

@ArshiRaiguptha

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Awesome Rish..!!

Loved it...!! :D

This is what we want in the show.., But...,Hmph..!!

lOve,

.aNaMiKa.

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blck234

@blck234

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Beautiful:)👏 Such a kick ass Khushi... loved it😳

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cherry227

@cherry227

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

fabulous! i wish this was what happened... dadi is in serious need of reality check :(((

beautifully written... could feel the emotions and khushis rage as well as despair! im still waiting for her to slap shyam for what he did to her

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dimple288

@dimple288

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

wow.. amazing os.. loved it.

i am glad to see khushi as a strong woman..

shyam and dadi deserves even more.

thanku soo much for the pm

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

truly beautiful! khushi standing up to shyam all on her own was a treat to read... nice of arnav to come to her help though she was doing pretty well for herself! maybe when shyam starts sexually harassing dadi only then would she stop blaming khushi! loved the contrast of cold and warm shivers you've written about as khushi feels shyam's and, later, arnav's eyes on her! aarnav's and khushi's names are engraved on each other's hearts, so they don't need it to be written in henna