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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

That was just Beautiful!

That SOB shyam! Why can't something like this happen in the show? I can't believe that Shyam is able to sneak into the house without anyone noticing him. Damn!

And i just loved how Arnav stood up for khushi and he even Raised his voice on Dadi *punches the air with joy* And the only thing that was missing was the Cry baby poojali. She should have been there witnessing her Pyaarasa Husband! 😡

Loved the end part! 😳 It was beautiful!

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sunshine23

@sunshine23

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

I loved this OneShot because it was ,to put into a small word, great!
I loved how Khushi slapped Shyam..and then I loved how Arnav stood by her..and gave Shyam a few punches himself!
I love reading your work, and have sent you a buddy request..will you accept it? :)

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Tia.0

@Tia.0

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

What a lovely os... That's the Khushi I love. This fiesty girl... 👏

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

THAT SURE WAS SOMETHING
OYYE GADHE TERE KO MARNE KA ITNA HI SHOK THA KYA JO KHUSHI KE AAS PAAS AANE KI APNE HIMMAT KARI
ARRE ZINDA BACH GAYE BACCHU AGAR DADI OR NANI NAHIN AATI NAA TOH AAJ ASR NE TERA KATAL KARR DIYA HOTA
GOOD ON KHUSHI FOR NOT BEING WEAK AGAINST THAT THING

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komal

@komalsirwani

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

beautiful..this is the real story..the real characters that the CV's have long forgotten...loved it..hope to see arnav and khushi as strongly potrayed as in this OS in the show...👏