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Sanchari

@.hea.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#41

This is something beautiful you read just after you wake up. I see I too, have a sunny day ahead.

Great great OS Gayathri. (I hope that's how to spell?)

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Varsha

@Psychedelic

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Awww! This was beautifully written Gayathri! Well done! :)

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flutterby

@flutterby

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#43

hey... happilyunknown( sorry dont know ur name) thanks very much for the pm... and dont say that the os was crap... it offered me a beautiful, light angle of the arnav- khushi relation.. i loved how u made arnav fill the void in khushi which her parents had left.. and hmmm... 😈 the moment where khushi feels arnav's fingers in her hair.. ruffling it was sweet.. the explosion of emotions she feels.. happiness, pure ecstasy, pleasure, that feeling of being with the one who u love cannot be described.. it has to be experienced.. 😍 only to have him not be there was like having someone throw a bucket of cold water thrown on u.. same goes with arnav... when he places khushi's hand on his chest.. and she pleads with him not to leave her.. it was a wonderful heart warming and heart breaking 🥺 moment... and ur last sentence was epic... well done..

ps- i am touched that u read my response on rae's post and decided to pm me ur work as well 🤗