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Mihika

@banditqueenn.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

This is truly beautiful <3, Sorry Gayathri I missed out on a lot of your stuff but this one absolutely heart wrenching 😳...And you played up with words so efficiently 😃...Looks like I got another writer to stalk up 🤣 😆

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shonagudia

@shonagudia

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Wow nice one ... Loved the description .. Everything was really beautiful. I thought It's all a dream after reading the first part but thankfully it's real.
The way Arnav described his Angel was awesome...

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

woww so beautiful OS.. love how you portrayed their pain beautifully 👍🏼

thanks for pm dear

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Bhavapriya

@Bunny_Bear

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

I am speechless..

And the only thing i could say for this OS is BEAUTIFUL.

The song was totally superb.

The emotions, the way you described things were PERFECT.

Very Well Written.

Thanks for the PM>

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

that was a wonderful OS! Really well written! 😊

I could feel the pain of both Arnav and Khushi. Not every writer can emote the character's emotions through words... so I'd say this is a job well done! 😊

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inajnar

@inajnar

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Wonderful as always...there is something so very different in your stories

Good luck for your exam !! 😊

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Maddy1270

@Maddy1270

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

thank you for the pm, Gayathri... all the best for your upcoming exams!

a moving os... the images and expressions used showed us the changes in khushi's and arnav's characters and the strong bond of love... loved the role reversal where arnav is the one about to bring sunshine into khushi's life when she's no longer the one who believes in miracles... khushi begging arnav not to leave her was beautifully written, truly emotional

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mika17

@mika17

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Wow dat was beautiful lovely os

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

That was beautiful... If this is the sort of stuff you come up with when you have exams, then you should have exams more often... I know i,m wishing you evil stuff, but kya kare😆