OS : Set Fire to the Rain

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MvDiva25

@MvDiva25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

Heyy! 🥱

I just saw this link while I was browsing through your comments (I know, weird thing to do, but I loved your OS so much that I read it again, and like, after reading it, I was wondering what the others were thinking about it! So.. Here I am! Tehe.. 😳)

Anyways, kudos for bringing out such an emotional OS. You managed to portray everyone's emotions perfectly. I mean, it wasn't sappy-sappy, but it just tugged at my heart so bad!

Please, please PM me if you're thinking of writing something new (which you definitely SHOULD!). Would LOOVE to read something from you! 😃

Oh and btw, congrats on being a Goldie!

xoxo

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

Pankti you write wonderfully dear

Cant believe this was ur first work

Very emotional one

Beautifully written

The Kiss was the ultimate ' the intensity at which it was delivered to the readers was super awesome

The song selected was the cherry on the top

You should, you should, you definitely should write more of OS and FFs pankti -

Priya

Edited by Arjuhisis - 13 years ago

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...Pwincess...

@...Pwincess...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

That was amazing!! It was written so beautifully!! If only this scene tool place in the show and the song was perfect for the situation! Cant wait to read more form you.

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Arjuhisis
Pankti you write wonderfully dear

Cant believe this was ur first work

Very emotional one

Beautifully written

The Kiss was the ultimate ' the intensity at which it was delivered to the readers was super awesome
The song selected was the cherry on the top

You should, you should, you definitely should write more of OS and FFs pankti -

Priya

Thanks dear...for your comments. I Pmed a reply to you too.

Yes it was my first work, and since then I try hard to improve.

Thanks for the encouragement.

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Anaya S.S

@nabnab

Navigator

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

This one was so intense it's hard to believe this is the first thing you've written on IF!

All the dialogues in this were almost unnverving in their intensity. I could feel all the emotion raging in that room; all the anguish and regret each was feeling.

The kiss and the way it promised what could be, while also pouring all his regrets and insecurities in it.

Your writing was very good as well; you conveyed everything powerfully and I especially loved the ending...that one last eyelock showing everything yet ending on such a painful note.

I liked Khushi taking a stand; in spite of loving him, she also needs the respect that was due to her and the right to live for herself.

Twas excellent- thanks for sending me the link

Anaya xx

And Adele Set Fire to The Rain is one of my favourites...the best song if you live in rainy London LOL 😆😆😆

Edited by nabnab - 13 years ago