OS : Set Fire to the Rain - Page 4

Originally posted by: HeadOverHeels

It's been a while since I've seen a bittersweet ending. So great job on that!

Song lyrics make it all the more rich, right?

So glad you wrote, and please keep writing as much as you can. It doesn't matter what, just as long as you do.

Much love.

Muah!

Wow, that was soo beautifully written! 👏

Congrats and the OS was nice!

Originally posted by: meera30

You should do this more often. A lot more often

This was beautiful. Loved the way the emotions poured out of your words. Loved the way you blended the lyrics with poetry of your own.

It would be a heart-wrenching scene to see on screen and you have done it justice and some more.

Nobody can say this is your first OS / attempt at writing :)

Beautiful!

Hey Pankti, my partner in crime. This is really good for your first attmept at writing. Set fire to the Rain is one of my fav Adele songs, the lyrics go really well with the mood of your story. Loved the subtleness of emotions that you have captured in this story- there is so much pain, longing and love but at the same time it felt serene to read it.

"One last time, their eyes locked, forgetting the whole world, forgetting the pain that they had caused each other, forgetting that there was anything other than their love for each other."

These lines were just beautiful.

You should write more often, writing is a gift that not many have.

Originally posted by: Naach_Basanti

Hey Pankti, my partner in crime. This is really good for your first attmept at writing. Set fire to the Rain is one of my fav Adele songs, the lyrics go really well with the mood of your story. Loved the subtleness of emotions that you have captured in this story- there is so much pain, longing and love but at the same time it felt serene to read it.

"One last time, their eyes locked, forgetting the whole world, forgetting the pain that they had caused each other, forgetting that there was anything other than their love for each other."

These lines were just beautiful.

You should write more often, writing is a gift that not many have.

How is it that I'm always late for the most wonderful things? 😵

Originally posted by: boyznaka

How is it that I'm always late for the most wonderful things? 😵

Well, enough of self analysis.

First attempt? Are you kidding me?

This is really, really good.

The song's absolutely perfect. And I love how you've shown each of their emotions so, so well and so clearly.

This line was particularly amazing--

"She will survive. Without him. Without his love. With him forever in her heart."

A strong Khushi is always a treat to read!

👏👏

And, these as well--

"One last time, their eyes locked, forgetting the whole world, forgetting the pain that they had caused each other, forgetting that there was anything other than their love for each other."

Beautiful. Just beautiful!

👏👏

Do write more. You're really, reaalllyyy good at it! 👍🏼👍🏼

And send me a pm everytime plijj? I'd be a fool to miss out on the works of such a wonderful writer! (And to be frank, stalking is tough man😆)

Originally posted by: inspiringstars

OH I am so glad you liked it very much. I was a little skeptical, because the end is not-so-happy, but then I always wanted Khushi to go from the house with her head held high, and when the time is right. I hope I will keep finding inspiration in writing. All beautiful comments like yours makes me believe that I can do it.

Yes its my first time, so I was learning the ropes of sending PMs etc, sorry I missed you out. Will definitely send you one, if I write more. (Trust me, I know how difficult stalking is 😉) I read your comments on almost everything that I read, and your comments are very very entertaining 😆.

Thanks again for reading and commenting.

Pankti

OMG me too! Like the 'Bhaad mein gayi aapki naukri' scene. I loved that fiesty Khushi.
Oh do continue writing. I'd love to.. Wait, laauu to read any and everything by you. It's pretty good stuff. :)
and that is completely okay! Bade bade shehron mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehtin hain 😆
OMG you do? *embarrassed*